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Come Winter

A subtle tingle; an inaudible shudder trembles in the pines For: Broken Wing’s Monoku contest

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Sandra Adams

Date: 12/27/2013 8:11:00 PM

you paint such a magical picture...one can see, hear, feel this one...nicely penned! :)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/26/2013 8:42:00 AM

Dear Tim - I know I've read this masterful piece before. I am there in the forest with snow dropped onto my head. love, Kathy

Chuck Melugin

Date: 12/14/2013 10:41:00 AM

Tim, You...one lined the ushering in of the season!! You poet you! in respect, chuck

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/11/2013 4:36:00 PM

Yup yup you did it just [shhh no ; use --]Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/6/2013 6:58:00 AM

sanamagan, tim... this is breathtakingly mysterious and excellent in imagery... bow!..:) huggs

Juli- Michelle

Date: 12/5/2013 7:14:00 PM

Lovely write. Thank you for your kind comments on my latest poem, though I know it's been awhile since I've been online. You are very kind, I enjoy your poetry. Love, Juli-Michelle

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/5/2013 5:45:00 PM

By the way I wanted to tell you the 1967 Bonnie and Clyde is the best EVER movie made on the subject i'm a huge fan on that movie also cheri

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/5/2013 5:27:00 PM

A well written line, sounded great but to be honest it left me wanting for more. cheri and thank you for your comments on my writes

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/4/2013 9:37:00 PM

Fantastic flight, Tim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/4/2013 4:45:00 PM

A stark image! a bit scary too. Thanks so much for stopping by, reading and commenting on my verse. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2013 3:40:00 PM

wow, I would love one like this if it were MY contest!!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/4/2013 3:17:00 PM

An excellent monoku Tim.Glad im.back on the soup reading you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/4/2013 2:29:00 PM

- Very good, Tim - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne

Date: 12/4/2013 2:25:00 PM

wow, I love this one, Tim