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He said come summer on a very hot day We will come back cross the river Climb the bluff you and I With our walkers Dreaming Of Course

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/5/2024 7:25:00 AM
I love the simplicity of this Sara but behind the simplicity I feel there lies much poignancy and wistfulness that comes with time passing. A lovely read. Cheers - Gary
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2024 8:17:00 AM
Yes, once we might have tried to climb that mass of rocky outcropping, but time takes its toll. Thank you, Gary for the visit. Sara K
Date: 2/27/2024 9:15:00 PM
Like Sara said, bring up pleasant memories of canoeing and hiking, fun times. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry my friend. Bill
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2024 4:25:00 AM
Bill, we were not that athletic so it would be a first for us. My husband used to go fishing on the river and on creeks when he was growing up though. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara K
Date: 2/27/2024 4:04:00 PM
this sounds like Bill and I...I imagine we'll still be climbing mountains and hiking with our walkers, if only in our minds. Well written. Loved your poem, Sara K. Have a pleasant evening, Sara B
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2024 4:24:00 AM
Your review of my work is delightful. Sara K
Date: 2/27/2024 3:37:00 PM
delicious and so brilliant poem, thanks Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2024 4:23:00 AM
Why, thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 2/27/2024 11:08:00 AM
Don't ever stop walking or dreaming , cuz that is what keeps us going Sara, :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/27/2024 1:39:00 PM
Mystic, Thanks for the encouragement. Yes, we can keep going to a certain point then we have to slow down. Sara K
Date: 2/27/2024 10:24:00 AM
This piece exudes ingenuity and creativity. Your words, dear Sara, are elegantly and potently crafted. Your sentiments are enchanting, reminding us of the longing for the imminent arrival of summer, which we eagerly await.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/27/2024 10:56:00 AM
Lasaad, Yes summer seems to be a time of relaxation and fun. thanks for the visit and kind review. Sara K
Date: 2/27/2024 9:52:00 AM
Very creative Sara... nice little walk in your poem..
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/27/2024 10:55:00 AM
It would be a nice little walk and climb, SO. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 2/27/2024 8:41:00 AM
Lovely sentiments Sara, summer can't come quick enough. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/27/2024 10:54:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. We are as well as can be for our age. LOL..Sara K
Date: 2/27/2024 6:57:00 AM
Dear Sara, This poem touched my heart. The anticipation in the simple lines, the promise whispered on a hot day, creates a wonderful scene. I can almost feel the cool river water and see the path up the bluff, walkers in hand, dreams in our eyes. I loved your design of the poem! - Blessings, Daniel
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/27/2024 8:26:00 AM
Your comments lifted my spirit, Daniel. I am delighted that you like the design. Sara K

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