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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Come rainbow. Make your colorful arch upon the sky. Make your picture where there is no canvas. Bring joy without a single word. Come rainbow into the bold blue air. Stretch through those shadowy clouds. Bring us promise and hope. Lift up our souls. an ocean apart a rainbow hides in the clouds shadows are reeling

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 3/4/2024 4:41:00 AM

Adorable write enjoyed reading your work.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/4/2024 5:49:00 AM

thank you! I appreciate you stopping by Yolanda. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/28/2024 5:47:00 PM

Rainbows can certainly spark our imaginations. A fantastic haibun, my friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 6:06:00 PM

thanks, Jerry, for visiting and for your positive comments. Yes, rainbows do spark our imaginations. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 2/28/2024 12:08:00 PM

Rainbows are so inspiring, not just to poets, but artists and musicians... and it is lovely how a child views them... Vivid images in your prose and an excellent haiku to finish it off... Nicely done dear Sara..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 6:06:00 PM

I know what you mean...children find rainbows magical and enchanting. I agree, 'artistic' types regardless of media chosen, find rainbows inspiring. When I see one, my breath is taken away...like I'm witnessing a miracle. Have a great evening, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/28/2024 7:53:00 AM

A true picture is painted. I've noticed how clouds and haze seem to produce rainbows. Thanks for this tribute to the beauty of nature.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 6:04:00 PM

I've noticed that too, Hilda. When clouds are heavy laden with moisture, they'll look like a rainbow. Thanks for your visit and comments, hugs, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/28/2024 7:05:00 AM

A delightful invitation to nature, Sara--an inspiration that is uplifting. Enjoyed the hopeful tone.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 6:03:00 PM

awww, thank you Vijay. Your comments are always positive. Glad you liked the 'hopeful' tone. We all need a little hope every day. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/28/2024 4:57:00 AM

Dearest Sara, this is an evocative title and Haiku subject exploring the concept of distance between two entities, with the rainbow metaphorically obscured by clouds and shadows moving in a captivating manner. Excellent work.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 5:02:00 AM

thank you, kind Sotto. I appreciate your insights and thoughtful comments as well as your accolades. Have a pleasant day, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 2/27/2024 9:26:00 PM

Nice poem I like the imagery!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 5:02:00 AM

thanks, Karen!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/27/2024 7:59:00 PM

Splendid thought. Rainbows show up everywhere. I like your halibun.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 5:03:00 AM

thank you for your always thoughtful comments. They add special meaning to my poems. Enjoy your day. Hugs, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 2/27/2024 6:31:00 PM

This is my favorite form of poetry for you to write in, Sara. Well done my poetess! Rainbows give me such hope, especial my personal one. Thank you for being who you are, naturally. Big bear hugs, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 5:04:00 AM

awwwww!!* Grateful to be your fellow poetess and rainbow. Sending you hugs for the entire day!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/27/2024 6:29:00 PM

Your poem makes me sense the creation of a rainbow in the works. Then there is a Double Rainbow…and how cool that a rainbow seen from above is a circle (a halo) Blessings, Sara!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 5:04:00 AM

a halo...hadn't thought of thought. Beautiful words, Kim. Thanks & enjoy your day, Sara