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Come Out and Play

Cigars left aside
Muddied floors
The rain isn't stopping
The thunder roars

A creaking door
The windows are open
Shadows rise
Then glasses were broken

Hello there
Would you come out and play
As the children stare
Ready to slay
You run and run
The fun has just begun
The moment you'll hold still
You'd feel a chill
The moment you turn back
The moment you'll die
Tripping, a branch of a tree
Children's faces with glee
You shout and cry
Asking the reason why

As you wake up from this bad dream
You'd realize you're in bed
You'd just hurt your head
Drink a pill
Think slowly
Think still
Someone might enter
Yes a child will
Asking you
Would you come out and play?


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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 2:09:00 PM
    congrats in Roy's contest............. SKAT

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 12:03:00 AM
    @Debbie. This is somehow based on the movie Also the title "Come Out and Play" by Makarov. was looking for inspiration and this came out.

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 12:00:00 AM
    This one I like a lot ;} glad you liked my grim reaper .

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 7:50:00 PM
    What a relief. Only a dream. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 1:22:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Very nicely done. AO

    Calubiran Avatar Nato Calubiran
    Date: 5/29/2013 7:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks dude. still waiting for winners of "Poems to Keep you Awake at Night". this was supposedly intended for that contest.
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 8:56:00 PM
    Nato. Congratulations, with your awesome poem. Goodnight~LINDA

    Calubiran Avatar Nato Calubiran
    Date: 5/28/2013 10:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope you have a goodnight sleep PD. maybe someone might wants to Come Out and Play
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 12:42:00 AM
    Nice one Nato, well written ....Seren

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 9:44:00 PM
    Thanks for the comments. Elai and Craig, would you come out and play?

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/25/2013 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Nato. sure i love to play lol... salamat sa comment mo... GOD bless u!
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 6:23:00 AM
    love how you featured your dream---feel the real moment here---keep writing---ELAI

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 6:15:00 AM
    Much fun Nato, perfect dream thoughts--I would change the form to rhyme though.