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Come Out and Play

Cigars left aside Muddied floors The rain isn't stopping The thunder roars A creaking door The windows are open Shadows rise Then glasses were broken Hello there Would you come out and play As the children stare Ready to slay You run and run The fun has just begun The moment you'll hold still You'd feel a chill The moment you turn back The moment you'll die Tripping, a branch of a tree Children's faces with glee You shout and cry Asking the reason why As you wake up from this bad dream You'd realize you're in bed You'd just hurt your head Drink a pill Think slowly Think still Someone might enter Yes a child will Asking you Would you come out and play? 5/24/13 Comments! Yes Comments! YEYEY! (/>_<)/ _|__|_

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Date: 6/10/2013 2:09:00 PM
congrats in Roy's contest............. SKAT
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Date: 5/30/2013 12:03:00 AM
@Debbie. This is somehow based on the movie Also the title "Come Out and Play" by Makarov. was looking for inspiration and this came out.
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Date: 5/30/2013 12:00:00 AM
This one I like a lot ;} glad you liked my grim reaper .
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Date: 5/29/2013 7:50:00 PM
What a relief. Only a dream. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/29/2013 1:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Very nicely done. AO
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Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/29/2013 7:27:00 PM
thanks dude. still waiting for winners of "Poems to Keep you Awake at Night". this was supposedly intended for that contest.
Date: 5/28/2013 8:56:00 PM
Nato. Congratulations, with your awesome poem. Goodnight~LINDA
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Nato Calubiran
Date: 5/28/2013 10:41:00 PM
I hope you have a goodnight sleep PD. maybe someone might wants to Come Out and Play
Date: 5/27/2013 12:42:00 AM
Nice one Nato, well written ....Seren
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Date: 5/24/2013 9:44:00 PM
Thanks for the comments. Elai and Craig, would you come out and play?
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Elai Cee
Date: 5/25/2013 7:22:00 PM
hi Nato. sure i love to play lol... salamat sa comment mo... GOD bless u!
Date: 5/24/2013 6:23:00 AM
love how you featured your dream---feel the real moment here---keep writing---ELAI
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