Come My Pretty

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Come my pretty Come and take my hand I'll show you around For you I got a plan The rooms are lit Just waiting for you Don't make me wait Don't make me blue Come my pretty A surprise I got for you For you so long I've waited Soon we'll be one instead of two I shall take you with me Deeper and deeper into the night Come my Pretty with me And let me take you under the ground! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2005 October,27,2014

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James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2014 1:58:00 PM

Mmm, trick or treat, where do we meet. Quirky Halloween poetry at it's best Dorian, James :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/21/2014 2:15:00 PM

Thank you James glad you found it quirky! Lol have a great weekend my dear friend! :) xxxx D

Alesia Leach

Date: 10/31/2014 3:57:00 PM

Wonderful poem. It reminded me of Dorothy, the Yellow Brick Road and the witch cackling.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/21/2014 2:12:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend Alesia! It did ah..lol..:) xxxx D