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Come Into My Parlour

I watched as the little spider hung from a silken thread Ready to begin construction of its intricate web With each weave of silk the web slowly took shape A web from which insects would seldom escape With its web all completed it took center stage And waited for an insect to blindly engage Then a butterfly came fluttering into view But eluded the web as it skillfully flew Then came a fly who had no such luck The spider reeled it in and with a nip and a tuck Began its soupy feast... .yuck The spider finished its meal and went back to wait For another insect to land on his plate Into his parlour he invites them all Insects of all sizes, big and small If any get caught in its silky snare Eaten they will be, right then and there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/24/2013 8:17:00 PM
Joseph, a worrisome little parlor there, wonderful poem, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/21/2013 11:28:00 AM
Uniquely creative winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/20/2013 6:59:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/20/2013 4:44:00 PM
Joseph nicely don congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/20/2013 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this true to life in the insect world story. Love, joyce
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Date: 5/31/2013 2:44:00 PM
again amazing imagery, created out of the real world.....
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Date: 5/29/2013 9:41:00 PM
very well done, Joseph. sure wish I had an idea for this one!
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Joseph May
Date: 5/30/2013 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.......I am sure you will come up with a good one.....
Date: 5/29/2013 1:21:00 PM
Very well written! Good luck in the contest friend. AO
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Joseph May
Date: 5/30/2013 7:52:00 AM
thank you AO
Date: 5/29/2013 2:33:00 AM
- A nice poem to read Joseph. - A magnificent construction works Spider Web - The spider sits waiting for his meal ..... he is quick ..... jummy ... a delicious fly! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 5/30/2013 7:52:00 AM
thank you Anne,.

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