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Your heavy heart is weary, worn Bloody and bruised, it’s fiercely torn To Loneliness, a vow you've sworn To dwell in night without a morn Come inside To live and love, you've lost your will Of sorrow’s cup you've had your fill Desire’s longing, quiet…still Heart frozen by rejection’s chill Come inside Chorus Come inside my chamber, feel the fire Come inside my heart, dip in desire Come inside my soul, devoid of brier Come inside my mind, your pain retire Refrain Come Come Come inside my body, come inside Come and dip inside my pleasure’s tide Come inside my body, come inside Come glide into heaven, come abide Come Come Come…..I N S I D E Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Date: 1/2/2014 6:31:00 AM
Lovely work Eileen. I feel the passion emanating from your poem. Happy new year to you.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/2/2014 7:04:00 AM
Same to you, my dear....Thanks for the visit. Wishing you all the best.
Date: 12/29/2013 5:10:00 AM
You sure got your hand on the oven switch there Eileen and its DAMM HOT inside, love to hear the music for this, blessings Carl
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/29/2013 5:33:00 AM
Well, in the cold season, with the wild, rain, and storm.....how better to be than HOT! ;) Thanks for the visit!
Date: 12/29/2013 12:04:00 AM
Wowza!!! Sweet and hot all at the same time... What an invitation! Happy New Year ! XOXOX
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/29/2013 5:35:00 AM
Thanks, my dear....Happy New Year to you too! Hugs!
Date: 12/28/2013 10:35:00 PM
We'll..lovely poem sweetie...filled with passions invitation ....aahhh to be young....happy new year....MD
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/29/2013 5:35:00 AM
Oh sweetie.............I'm not that young, but my heart is....and always will be.....Thanks for the visit. Hope you have a fabulous New Year! Love ya!
Date: 12/28/2013 11:05:00 AM
how appealing can this get, and so inviting as well, eileen.. may the new year usher the graces of hopes fulfilled.. huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/29/2013 5:36:00 AM
Thanks, Nette. This is a lovely comment. I appreciate your continued support and visits and lovely remarks. Bless you. May the New Year find your dreams coming true as well.
Date: 12/27/2013 9:43:00 PM
Hi Eileen, Sizzling romantic write..Hope you're enjoying the holidays! Ken
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/29/2013 5:37:00 AM
:) Thanks, Ken. Coming from a poet who writes passionate work, this is a high compliment. All the best for the New Year! :)
Date: 12/27/2013 5:09:00 PM
you sure inspire with beautiful poetry such as this,,,,,have a wonderful new year Eileen, and to all your love ones....Harry
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 5:32:00 PM
Harry....so good to hear from you. Thanks ever so much for this lovely visit and post. Hope all is well with you and your loved ones and that you enjoyed a lovely Christmas. God bless..........
Date: 12/27/2013 4:01:00 PM
i'm sure that many people would be happy to take you up on this invitation! great poem, eileen..........
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 5:34:00 PM
Thanks, my dear Ilene. I hope this can somehow be turned into a love song. Wouldn't that be awesome.
Date: 12/27/2013 9:08:00 AM
This is fantastic! I somehow think you have more verses to write for this one. It feel it could be even more spectacular.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2013 8:01:00 PM
I will give it some thought.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 5:35:00 PM
WOW! Well....I really don't now how else I could embellish it without becoming too......well, let me give it some thought and see what I can come up with. Any suggestions? I'm all ears..........Or in this cyber world.....I'm all EYES!
Date: 12/27/2013 8:55:00 AM
Damn, YES! I'll sip another cup of what you're having. True story. I hope you had a wonderful Xmas. ;-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 5:36:00 PM
I will gladly share the cup with you, Drake. Gladly....Yes, so far so good. I've had a wonderful time with family. It couldn't be better. Hope you have been equally blessed. Hugs
Date: 12/27/2013 4:36:00 AM
Lovely, beautiful poem, Eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 5:38:00 PM
Why, thank you, Dr Ram. :)
Date: 12/27/2013 2:07:00 AM
~W O W~ Eileen, you have a beautiful heart.... xox..Linda
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 5:39:00 PM
OXOXOXO.......Thanks every so much, Linda. Very sweet of you to say that. Hope you will be showered with wonderful surprises in the new year.

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