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Come Home Baby

Come home baby Thinking back... over my lifetime mistakes I've made, I realize... so much pain , my life's in tatters... it come's as no surprise Now I know... I'll wait a lifetime, four score years, if you're the prize... take your time, I know you're hurting... this time, I'll dry your eyes Chorus There's one thing I know (I know) I want you to come home baby (I know) I want you home to stay There's one thing I know (I know) I want you to come home baby (I know) I want you home to stay Looking back... I see it clearly, you needed, so much more from me Give me time... just be patient I'll be all, you need me to be bridge I want you home to stay! I want you home to stay! Go to chorus Think about... the lonely night time why should we, spend it all alone? Think of us... We need each other Why don't you please come home? chorus repeat fade John Derek Hamilton October 25,2016

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Paloma P

Date: 10/27/2016 6:13:00 AM

Nice flow and the sentiment is affecting, good one John!

John Hamilton
Date: 10/27/2016 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Paloma

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/27/2016 1:15:00 AM

I agree with Daniel, this is truly one of your best, John:) do you compose music for all your lyrics, John??

John Hamilton
Date: 10/27/2016 9:06:00 AM

Some songs have music others not yet, working on the lyrics for now. Thanks Jo

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/25/2016 3:56:00 PM

John, you're quite the lyricist. This is one of your best, i think:)

John Hamilton
Date: 10/25/2016 4:34:00 PM

Thanks Daniel, yeah, sometimes they feel good as they flow out so easy, songs are easier for me than poetry, not a big fan of structured writes, but I do them to give myself more discipline.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/25/2016 2:49:00 PM

Such a fabulous lyric song..I can hear the sad longing melody in my ear...Awesome..Charma.

John Hamilton
Date: 10/25/2016 2:51:00 PM

Thanks Charma, sorry comment jumped!

John Hamilton
Date: 10/25/2016 2:49:00 PM

Thanks Heidi

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/25/2016 2:35:00 PM

This is great John! I like it.

John Hamilton
Date: 10/25/2016 2:50:00 PM

Sorry comment jumped thanks Heidi!