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Come Back To Me

Though your separation is transitory It chokes my respiratory My mind is perspicuous Yet my heart is capricious Behold me! help to gravitate me to this earth As my soul is about to dissipate near the hearth Why you left me in an alienate place I can't get out of this love maze Bear my words though they are inurbane Consider them as sweet as cane These are of no flatter or praise But an endeavour for your feelings to raise You can make me a scapegoat But don't make me sail in a lonely boat Don't be malignant My love for you is magnificient

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/19/2016 12:11:00 PM
You wove the required words into a very deep poem Bala:-) hugs Jan xx
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Bala Naga Lakshmi
Date: 9/19/2016 12:15:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 9/18/2016 5:53:00 AM
Well penned. Congrats! :)
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Bala Naga Lakshmi
Date: 9/19/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thanks for your comments
Date: 9/8/2016 12:19:00 PM
Very touching. Separation is so painful. I like your wordings; they are so rhymed. Hugs Sew
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Bala Naga Lakshmi
Date: 9/8/2016 9:41:00 PM
Thanks for your valuable comments.

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