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Come and Find Me In My Solitude

Away from the kinetic trails of the day, My entire spirit pines for a lilting mantra Where I turn into a tender shape Fluid, quiet and chaste…my lucent breaths Taste the scent of feline quietude warmed By buoyant flows into the welcoming infinity of space that accepts nothing nothing But an amiable pilgrimage of the heart’s wish— 0ne with one where I inhabit the ‘now’ In its universal residence ,as my whole essence Marvels at the joy of contemplative silence … That allowing ‘what is’ opens my being Like a harvest of light and flowers Within an unknown garden where a dove, a river Becomes a softened, divine tune humming , "Come and find me in my solitude." Late June 2018 Premiere Contest For Brian Strand

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Date: 12/12/2016 4:39:00 PM
Hi Nette, I see you did one for the contest it reads good to me, I like it a lot hope you do well with it, all the seasons best.'
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Date: 12/6/2016 6:59:00 PM
Poetry that soothes the soul!
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Date: 12/5/2016 5:57:00 PM
Really great write. Lovely imagery. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/5/2016 3:49:00 PM
Coming back with congratulations!
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Date: 12/5/2016 1:34:00 PM
- Beautiful ... just posted ... and won (...? ....?) ... Well done - Congratulations, I am speechless :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2016 1:31:00 PM
Beautifully written. Very nice. Congratulations Nette :)
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Date: 12/5/2016 1:13:00 PM
The yeng and yang of the mind and the silence that inhabits the space between..good luck my spiritual friend
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Date: 12/5/2016 1:12:00 PM
Your beautiful poem reads like a meditation, Nette. I'll have to reread it again a few more times. Good luck in the contest. Agnes
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Date: 12/5/2016 1:11:00 PM
"Maranatha, come and find me in my solitude" Beautiful, congratulations.
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Date: 12/5/2016 11:00:00 AM
Cosmic. : )
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Date: 12/5/2016 10:48:00 AM
Incredibly beautiful and so enchanting Nette. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/5/2016 10:27:00 AM
I'll be right there, nette. Don't go anyplace. Sounds divine:)
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