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Come and Find Me In My Solitude

It’s again one of those evenings It’s again one of those pains It’s again one of those moments of loneliness; When a whiff of fragrance in the air sets the heart pounding, When the soothing moonlight sets the soul on fire, When you cry and couldn’t shed tears, When you drink the ocean and couldn’t quench the thirst, When you envy the twinkling stars and hate the free roaming clouds, When time stands still and each moment you live seems like an eternity, When at each breath in you live and at each breath out you die! ~12/1/16 ~Mystic Rose contest

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Date: 12/20/2016 11:27:00 AM
Abdul, this is a very good poem to follow... LINDA
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Date: 12/5/2016 3:43:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, Abdul. Agnes
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Date: 12/5/2016 2:46:00 PM
Lonely, yes, but this is a lush poem; I read it several times, inhaling it, drinking it in. Well done, Abdul! : )
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/6/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Doug for your comment--it's a lush comment, I read it and reread it! Lol
Date: 12/5/2016 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 12/5/2016 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement! I understand about those evenings
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Darren White
Date: 12/5/2016 10:41:00 PM
In the company of a few good poetry books, a nice cup of coffee and nightly conversations. Deal!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/5/2016 1:49:00 PM
Let's spend some evenings together then! Lol.
Date: 12/4/2016 11:53:00 PM
I feel your loneliness.... Good luck in the contest.
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