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Come and Find Me In My Solitude

Come and Find Me in My Solitude four fingers in a water glass to keep the “creep” away four fingers in a water glass to keep the curse at bay no ice, let’s keep it quiet, hard bite of whiskey’s sting “hair of the dog that bit ya” as the dying grey wolves sing rocking inside the boxcars camping beside the track drowning dreams of a yesterday that’s never coming back huddled beneath “newsprint” blankets curled in pain’s fetal ball dreading the sounds of the sunset fearing the crash of night’s fall praying for death in a doorway shivering against marbled stone a vision through slow closing eyelids of somebody calling him home 12/2/2016 submitted to – COME AND FIND ME IN MY SOLITUDE – Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/3/2016 7:36:00 PM
Totally agree with CayCay...she stole my thunder lol...great job John...god bless...^WW^
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John Lawless
Date: 12/4/2016 9:42:00 PM
Thanks WW, always nice to hear from you.
Date: 12/2/2016 6:31:00 PM
DAMN. May I say that? It is my true response to the intensity you so poetically delivered. Sorrow led to sorrow to layers of imagery bleak in despair. I was impressed by the poem, sad from the content and the cuss word just popped. I'm leaving it, hoping it does not offend, but garners and reveals the emotion you gave me before I could sort them. Sometimes such a word works! You don't need it, but gl in the contest ... 7 ... FAV CayCay (read again and may cry)
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John Lawless
Date: 12/2/2016 6:57:00 PM
Well, CayCay, I would say that is the ultimate praise....to move someone to utter a cuss word in shared sorrow at the reading of a poem. Thank you for the high praise, high mark, and for your support.
Date: 12/2/2016 6:03:00 PM
Thanks John, for sharing brings back memories some good some bad but I am glad I never have to go back
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John Lawless
Date: 12/2/2016 6:55:00 PM
Yeah, John, there is an emptiness to that solitude...a view of the edge of oblivion. Glad you appreciated the poem.
Date: 12/2/2016 4:54:00 PM
Very deep and I feel a bit of longing in this piece. That is what I like about your poetry John, it creates many thoughts and ideas in my mind, leaving me believing I know what's going on but also wondering if there isn't something I'm missing. Good luck in the contest
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John Lawless
Date: 12/2/2016 6:53:00 PM
Well Chris, I believe that a poem should leave the reader "hungry" for more.....more of what....that depends on the reader. thanks for your continued support of my writing.

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