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Comatose

When I come too close She becomes comatose from An overdose Of some bad love I suppose Her heart calcified from the bleed Now there's a stone where it used to be A fort built around her being Echoes of pain's sound for seeing There's damage done to repair She needs a spark with some air She needs a gun with a flare Can I break her out of it Gotta break her out of it She puts up a wall And she's shutting me out she don't know me at all Cause I wont let her down And darkness it comes and takes over her soul and there's nowhere to run there's nowhere to go Gotta break her out of it *It's about trying to love a girl that has been damged from a past relationship.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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