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Colours In the Sky

QUOTE BY CHARLES MESSINA "Two doves in white flying, feathers glow beneath the morning's rainbow colours" Counting colours in you Not so clear sky of blue Until the greyness spoils the view, And the prism of forming rainbows just grew, Then from under the archway two doves of white flew. © Harry J Horsman 2022

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Peter Rees

Date: 2/15/2023 1:15:00 AM

Enjoyed your imagery very much , especially the appearance of the doves in the last line. Well done.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/11/2022 9:00:00 AM

Your imagery is delightful Harry, Sorry I have been scarce but time is a limited commodity - I hope you are well and wish you and your lovely family the peace of Christmas tide, the joyfulness of laughter and that 2023 brings whatever dreams you wish for to fruition . Hugs and blessings dear friend, Jennifer.

Ann Peck

Date: 12/11/2022 8:29:00 AM

I like how you brought the two white doves into your poem.

Karen Jones

Date: 12/10/2022 5:42:00 PM

The imagery in this is exceptionally beautiful. I can't pick a favorite line really but the last two lines bring home the visuals.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 12/10/2022 8:22:00 AM

Hello hh. This is lovely and yes poetic in every way. I loved the title and how you incorporated it into a beautiful love. For all lovers may the colors be countless. Thank you for sharing your talent. May this day find you well. Blessings always.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2022 1:09:00 PM

A real Gem, harry.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/6/2022 6:57:00 AM

I see occasionally in the spring and summer some ring-necked doves here that are almost white, and they are beautiful. I enjoy hearing their calls, the whirr of their wings, and the beauty they bring. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara