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The world around us In shades of light – soft or bold That stirs emotions As the mind through eye Perceives these variations Giving them meaning As it attempts to Mix ciaos with order to Create harmony Finished: September 28, 2009 placed thried in Brian Strand's contest

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Date: 10/16/2009 9:04:00 PM
Congratulations. Sure, you made it big in Brian's contest! Smile at the moon ... Canny.
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your third place win in Brian's contest!
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Date: 9/30/2009 12:58:00 PM
Elaine, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 9:54:00 AM
What n honour to share a spot with this lovely piece...conrats to you. This was such a fun experience. BG
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Date: 9/30/2009 9:25:00 AM
Wonderful view. Congratulations on your third place finish in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor my friend. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 9/30/2009 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations Lainie on this reflective poem...well deserving a win in Brian's challenging contest!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 9/30/2009 3:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Lainie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2009 12:54:00 AM
Congrats on you success in my contest Elaine.Rgds Brian My latest contest Five&Twenty is now open
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Date: 9/11/2009 4:21:00 PM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2009 9:10:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Elaine.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/11/2009 6:59:00 AM
This says worlds. Love, daver
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Date: 9/11/2009 6:06:00 AM
This is a wonderful Senyru, Elaine. It is deep and rich. It speaks volumes to me. Excellent work! Thank you for your kind words. Love, Robin
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