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colour reborn

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colour reborn

walking this path
eyes washed 
in fallen treasure
ingrowing droplets
deep within
one's mind

in distant memory
looking at life 
a mirror
through a looking glass
the inner soul

the voice ignored
spelling 
a message
to lie 
treachery

in colour 
from the soul
my heart's grave
marked upon vision
the mist rising

walking to the crossroads
sun kissed sparkle
in a beautiful
rainbow
i will
love again

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  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:08:00 PM
    It is so hard to even try to love again after a relationship has ended. But, if we don't try, we will just end up with a life of nothing but misery and regret...Never give up on love!...Wonderful message you send in this poem! Great work!...Thank you, once again for the kind comments, Liam!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/15/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WITH SO MUCH PLEASURE I THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 8:20:00 PM
    Colour Reborn is a beautiful poem. I love your last stanza. thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 5:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LUCILLA THANK YOU DEARLY FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:53:00 PM
    This is just so lovely. I think your style is soothing and a pleasure to read.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH ANDREA BEAUTIFUL COMMENT WARMLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Very beautifully written poem, nice read...Peter

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 5:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU DEEPLY PETER GREATLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 10:26:00 AM
    liam, a well expressed poem... lovely light, and path... Linda

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 5:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOVELY IN THE LIGHT I THANK YOU DEEPLY
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 8:19:00 AM
    You will love again..Of course our life is a circle.Everything that starts in love ends in love.Every past experience help us in the future ones..to avoid same mistakes and to appreciate that what doesnt kill us make us stronger..I can see a splash of sxarlet red upon your grey : )smile

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 5:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OH AM I BLUSHING SORRY BEAUTIFUL ENDEARING COMMENT SMILE I PASS TO YOU THANK YOU HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 9/10/2013 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Scarlet i meant : )
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Yes you will Liam, and such a joy to read your poetry, the fruit of your soul's power, have a blessed day, the kind that only heaven can form, and only God can deliver, I bequeath you a petal, as a reminder that we are all part of one flower, God's flower, love joy peace xxx

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I WILL HOLD IT GENTLY FROM WERE IT CAME BEAUTIFUL HEARTFELT COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED