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Colour Reborn

walking this path eyes washed in fallen treasure ingrowing droplets deep within one's mind in distant memory looking at life a mirror through a looking glass the inner soul the voice ignored spelling a message to lie treachery in colour from the soul my heart's grave marked upon vision the mist rising walking to the crossroads sun kissed sparkle in a beautiful rainbow i will love again ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/12/2013 12:08:00 PM
It is so hard to even try to love again after a relationship has ended. But, if we don't try, we will just end up with a life of nothing but misery and regret...Never give up on love!...Wonderful message you send in this poem! Great work!...Thank you, once again for the kind comments, Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/15/2013 10:26:00 AM
WITH SO MUCH PLEASURE I THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/10/2013 8:20:00 PM
Colour Reborn is a beautiful poem. I love your last stanza. thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 5:35:00 AM
LUCILLA THANK YOU DEARLY FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/10/2013 4:53:00 PM
This is just so lovely. I think your style is soothing and a pleasure to read.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 5:28:00 AM
THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH ANDREA BEAUTIFUL COMMENT WARMLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/10/2013 10:26:00 AM
liam, a well expressed poem... lovely light, and path... Linda
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 5:18:00 AM
LOVELY IN THE LIGHT I THANK YOU DEEPLY
Date: 9/10/2013 8:19:00 AM
You will love again..Of course our life is a circle.Everything that starts in love ends in love.Every past experience help us in the future ones..to avoid same mistakes and to appreciate that what doesnt kill us make us stronger..I can see a splash of sxarlet red upon your grey : )smile
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 5:17:00 AM
OH AM I BLUSHING SORRY BEAUTIFUL ENDEARING COMMENT SMILE I PASS TO YOU THANK YOU HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/10/2013 8:20:00 AM
Scarlet i meant : )

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