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Colors of Your Face

At night I oft forget the sun and colors of the world, when their demise befall at dusk and darkest grays unfurl. Oh, cruelest night, you strangle light, day’s vibrancy succumbs to you, like death you steal my breath; in shadowed daze of midnight, I dream for dawn to come. I’ll never fade in faithless gloom; I’ll strain to see the stars. But dimmed above bleak city nights, their luminesce seems far. So till the blazing coral-pinks of morn stream through my drapes, I’ll close my eyes envisioning the colors of your face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/26/2015 4:39:00 AM
very beautiful Rhonda.. I so love the lines, strain to see the stars to coral-pinks of morn.. :)! wow!!!//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/22/2015 6:15:00 AM
This is a beauty, I especially love the ending.. the promise of a new day, an opportunity to try again.. hope your weekend is a blessedd one ;) hugs Wilma
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Date: 3/22/2015 2:35:00 AM
Excellent pen Rhonda! I truly enjoyed your beautiful poetic piece dear friend. A 7! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) Hugs!D.
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Date: 3/20/2015 12:45:00 PM
Rhonda: I'm no great poet but that's a great poem. It bordered on "too deep for me" but it shed some wonderful light into a dark, oft-empty head. Thank you for sharing. oldbuck
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:29:00 AM
Rhonda, this rhyming poem is beautiful, full of wonderful words and lines, a well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, it snowed . . .
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Date: 3/19/2015 11:52:00 PM
this is so delightful, Rhonda. And the way you ended it with colors of your face after discussing the night stealing the light of day. It was very well composed! Is it for any contest? Did you find any more poems of you know who??
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