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Colors of Love

Flipping albums, moments color and monochrome holding hands in parks, rolling in warm sands fifty green velvety wedded springs breezed by thousands orange west suns bade goodnight laying at the tremulous autumn of life clear blue skies in the window mock mottled skin crimson rose blooming in the pot hurts frail eyes the unbroken promise of love still shines in the silver of unkempt hair as she bends to tuck him in black of limpid eyes behind glasses as she slowly trims his nails. written 06/08/2016

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Date: 2/8/2017 11:42:00 AM
Wonderful write Sara, 27/30 worthy of 4th place, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 6/24/2016 3:15:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind comments! Your "Colors of Love" also shows the true gestures and gentle caring that accompanies Love! Very visual and felt! :-)
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Date: 6/10/2016 8:10:00 PM
Beautiful and emotional, Sara. Congratulations on your placement in the 'colors of love' contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/10/2016 9:18:00 PM
Thanks a lot Sandra,loved your poem a lot!
Date: 6/10/2016 6:46:00 PM
Congrats!
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/10/2016 9:18:00 PM
Thanks Tom!
Date: 6/10/2016 4:56:00 PM
- Congratulations on your fifth place at your beautiful poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/10/2016 9:23:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I loved your 'Heartbeats' too:)
Date: 6/10/2016 4:35:00 PM
Wow, I just loved the love in this, it really did bring tears to my eyes! This was touching.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/10/2016 9:21:00 PM
Thanks a lot for picking my poem,Casarah!
Date: 6/10/2016 4:27:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/10/2016 9:18:00 PM
Thanks a lot BL!
Date: 6/9/2016 12:23:00 AM
this captured the deep emotions of love, Sara. Very nicely done.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/9/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 6/8/2016 1:11:00 PM
Beautifully done Sara...
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/8/2016 1:41:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Charlie!

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