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Colors In The Sky SHM

Like mirrored glass upon their eyes they own reflective beauty from God's peeling laughter he made them so perfect they hypnotize as they soar in the air, they don't look for answers. A symbol of innocence and love united two peacemakers like conscientious jewels aiming for the threshold of His lighted path, no one ever clashes here in duel. Bird servants of His light, they fly as one beneath the bows of heaven, it's you and I let us fly towards that golden sun though we own legs, we're meant to fly Let us be like those doves, living side by side as we eye this life, we all need a little guide. it is you and I beneath the bows of heaven soaring in the air we all need a little guidance - at the threshold of His light we find it

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Date: 1/6/2024 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/7/2024 3:57:00 AM
thank you my friend , take care
Date: 1/2/2024 7:44:00 AM
Oops! Vie, I love this poem (and the title) But unfortunately, there were too many syllables in the sonnet. Sorry... Happy New Year, dear friend.
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Date: 1/2/2024 10:18:00 AM
sorry about that just noticed lol, still I had fun writing for it, thanks
Date: 12/7/2023 3:38:00 PM
I agree...we all need a little guidance. I appreciated you using doves, for they are symbolic and rich in purity dwelling side by side. And I thought the last two lines were simply powerful! Thanks for sharing your beautiful, poetic voice, hugs, Sara
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Date: 12/8/2023 2:52:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the poem, we all need to be guided, and when its the right leader, we win:)
Date: 12/7/2023 4:31:00 AM
beautiful poem, indeed, we need guidance, whereever it comes froms, enjoyed your mpessage Rose, thanks alot
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Date: 12/8/2023 2:52:00 AM
Enjoyed seeing you on my page Yann, stay strong and beautiful as God made you :)
Date: 12/7/2023 3:45:00 AM
You have done the sonnet so well, it rhymes so nicely and such a good flow.. Your monoku and haiku is a good result of the sonnet.. Soupmail..
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Date: 12/8/2023 2:51:00 AM
Thanks Silent Partner lol

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