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This palette of life Is glowing Shiny bright colors Are flowing Painting the sun Shadow play Whispers of gold Silver gray Fire-blazing red A lit fuse Into the night Starlight hues Daylight changes Lemon fields Wildflower tints Emerald yields A shred of pale Angel white Completes the spin Upon the light written 1/13/2011

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Date: 8/24/2014 10:57:00 AM
Deb, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 6/27/2014 11:29:00 AM
Dazzling with colors, this is a beautiful, creative write that I love. Congratulations on a great win! Warmest regards.
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Date: 6/27/2014 7:00:00 AM
A good one, congrats!
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Date: 6/27/2014 6:43:00 AM
Perfect
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Date: 6/26/2014 8:42:00 PM
It's so nice how you did this like paints in a palette, a "spin upon the light" Congrats for your win, Deb.
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Date: 6/26/2014 8:22:00 PM
Lovely, free flowing poem on colors, Deb. Congrats for the win. Mohan
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Date: 6/26/2014 5:35:00 PM
very impressive poem full of colour Deb superb pen congrats on 2nd place and ty for taking part hugs
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:42:00 AM
Simply worded and easy to read while conveying vivid descriptiveness. This is an impressive presentation.
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:29:00 AM
One thing nature does display, is the beautiful array of natural colours. Us humans can only copy them. Beautifully said Deb....:)
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Date: 1/13/2011 8:45:00 AM
beautiful write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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Date: 1/13/2011 7:20:00 AM
A colorful panopoly. A careening, meandering stream of color! Your satiating hues brighten the mundane sphere!
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:32:00 AM
Such a great use of colors to paint a picture. Very nice. BG
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Date: 1/13/2011 5:57:00 AM
Simply beautiful Deb:)) Makes me want to paint right now!
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Date: 1/13/2011 5:12:00 AM
You've pretty much built yourself a rainbow there ! A very pleasant and colourful poem, which I've enjoyed more with each reading
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