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Colored Umbrellas

Colored umbrellas, they’re surely carried Each woman has with her colorful masts Rain did plow down from the sky and harried Reflection from the all too wet ground casts Each woman has with her colorful masts Stopping the rain from reaching their soft hair Reflection from the all too wet ground casts They see their faces, looking like they care Stopping the rain from reaching their soft hair The umbrella does function as a block They see their faces, looking like they care Through the reflection of the time’s tick-tock The umbrella does function as a block The rain falls so softly now, runs on down Through the reflection of the time’s tick-tock The air is filled with moisture on their crown The rain falls so softly now, runs on down Rain did plow down from the sky and harried The air is filled with moisture on their crown Colored umbrellas, they’re surely carried
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 12:04:00 AM
I don t find it easy to write a pantoum..but for you its as if it came naturally.Just beautifully penned Russell
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Date: 6/6/2013 4:52:00 PM
This is an outstanding Pantoum. Effective and vividly written. Rain should be colorful to bright the gray day. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/6/2013 1:16:00 PM
excellent write, russell!.. very colorful joyride into a world of parasols and rain... seems its showering everywhere... i am really taken back by this.. sail away!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:56:00 PM
Very good pantoum which as you know is not an easy write. Beginning to keep tabs on you top 100 in the poetrysoup community. On to more comments.
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