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Colored Paper

You're the reason, I wrote a poem on colored paper. You are my rainbow at the end of a dream. I love the way you touch my soul. I love the fact, that with you I... Am not alone.

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Date: 1/10/2024 1:24:00 PM
Robert, your poem on colored paper is a masterpiece of emotion. Each line paints a vibrant picture of joy and connection. The way you describe love as a rainbow, your soul-touching, and the beautiful assurance that solitude fades in your company—it's a poetic celebration of profound connection and shared moments. Your words resonate deeply, creating a touch of love and companionship. Bravo on capturing the essence of meaningful connections in such a beautiful way. - Blessings, Daniel
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Robert Kinard
Date: 1/12/2024 5:06:00 PM
Thank you, you know how to make a guy feel good. I wrote what I felt, and I was at work when the words came to me.
Date: 1/9/2024 2:33:00 AM
I like your poem. I like how, as a love poem, it starts with 'you'. I also like the very beginning - how love made you choose coloured paper; and how at the end, the assonance chime 'touch my soul'- 'not alone', matches the chime of love :)
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/15/2024 6:59:00 PM
No apology needed. I am glad you wrote the poem :)
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Robert Kinard
Date: 1/15/2024 4:24:00 PM
Thank you, sorry it took me this long, I am working on another piece of poetry.

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