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Color of Sun

You'll find a piece in the puzzle, that is part of the past under billowy white clouds, and the sizzling sun in a wood sided home. where the trees are in bloom where there's room for a childhood, that has only begun There is a piece of the puzzle, outside in the yard while wheels of a tractor come alive in the fields There's a five year old girl skating sidewalks, with cracks rollers, beneath her, singing "clickity clack" while a rustle of whirlwinds is fast on her heels to rife with the ruffles she wears on her back Faces she knows will be leaning on fences Lifting up smiles, and knowing her name Where the same furrowed brows, and most without shame work for the gain, of a few measly dollars And mothers will holler..."Come home! Time for supper!" As the sky has turned copper, at the end of the day There is a piece of her, dreaming out under the elms, where a heart might be broken, and the stars cast a spell What is home harbors there, where her heart wants to dwell In a room with a puzzle, spread out for her eyes To sort out, and covet, and search for the sky Where there's room for a childhood that has only begun And a piece in the puzzle the color of sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/7/2014 9:54:00 AM
Congratulation on the fine win, thanks for sharing this lovely poem, carrie
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Date: 2/27/2014 11:17:00 PM
gosh, Carrie. it just dawned on me that you chose the same picture as I did, and yours has more that free verse flair to it!! I think maybe I had read yours before I even attempted the contest myself. Wish I'd come to see the winners list sooner. it's amazing to see them shown with the artist's own blog, isn't it? congratulations for your win.
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Date: 2/26/2014 9:14:00 PM
Carrie, you already know I love this.. well, I think this may be a soup first... check It out, you're gonna like this... http://www.stephaniedeshpande.com/contemporary-free-rhyme-poetry-contest/ Her page is now linked to your poem... how awesome is this??? It is like an art love fest... visual and literary, holding hands! I am staggered by this wonderful gift. I've been practically floating since I found out. hugs!
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:44:00 PM
Sure reads as a winner! You are one heck of a competitor! Light & Love
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Date: 1/16/2014 9:16:00 PM
What a way to do that challenge. I have avoided all the hard work like you have put into this one. Sure to do very well, Carrie.
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Date: 1/16/2014 4:03:00 PM
will have to check out the painting, but I love this poem, Carrie
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:08:00 AM
This took me places and moved my thoughts. Good work.
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