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Ablaze with the warmth of eternity Vibrant and resonate in essence Where truth is not lost to uncertainty And strength is born from its presence. A color owed tribute for birth Crimson, the hue of our being What price is placed on its worth When in blood we've given it meaning. Crimson-Poetry Contest Sponsored By Royal Ninja 07/25/2016

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/2/2017 8:33:00 PM

Wow Charlie, such depth in your intriguing and compelling write. Breathtakingly beautiful and enthralling. Your words bring crimson to life!

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/3/2017 8:45:00 PM

Thank you Susan for such gracious encouragement...

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/31/2016 11:37:00 AM

An excellent write, Charlie! Beautifully written! Blessings!

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/31/2016 5:12:00 PM

Thank you Kim...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2016 9:31:00 PM

what a wonderful way to do that color of crimson, Charlie. Hope this does well in the contest for you.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/29/2016 9:50:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 7/28/2016 12:29:00 PM

Excellent! This should do very well in the contest.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/29/2016 9:49:00 PM

Thank you Maurice...

Ronald Kent

Date: 7/27/2016 5:56:00 AM

Great write CS, good luck in the contest.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/27/2016 6:37:00 AM

Thank you Ronald...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/26/2016 12:49:00 PM

Yes, crimson IS "the hue of our being." A 7 for this fine poem, Charlie! Janice

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/26/2016 7:12:00 PM

Thank you Janice...

Nilima Deb

Date: 7/26/2016 12:28:00 AM

great thought...deep write !!

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/26/2016 6:21:00 AM

Thank you Nilma...

Lin Lane

Date: 7/25/2016 5:22:00 PM

It seems I'm still hanging around, due to unforeseen circumstances, so while I'm here I'll take this opportunity to post a comment in appreciation of your terrific Quatrains, Charlie. and now I'm off...again. Hugs

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/26/2016 6:24:00 AM

You know how much I appreciate your being with us, thank you Lin...

Tom Quigley

Date: 7/25/2016 5:09:00 PM

Great write.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/26/2016 6:25:00 AM

Thank you Tom...

Lin Lane
Date: 7/25/2016 5:23:00 PM

Hi, Tom. Since I see you here I'll say hi and g'bye.