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Color My World

If I could see all colors Would my favorite be red The color of passion Rose petals on the bed Perhaps I would choose green In pastures we could lay Being there beside you Would take my cares away I'm inclined to choose brown The color of your eyes I already love them They are gentle and wise I don't think I'd choose blue It just sounds way too sad I might prefer purple If that one makes you glad You bring me the colors The ones I cannot see You're the unseen rainbow That can be seen by me My favorite is yellow The one color I see I bathe in your sunlight Every day you're with me Dedicated to my sweetie, written by her colored blind husband. Happy Mothers Day to the love of my life

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/13/2013 11:01:00 AM

Your sweetie is blessed! :) Lovely poem...so so lovely. The colors that you can't see.....You do now...and you will. :)

Len Gasun

Date: 5/24/2013 12:57:00 AM

Wow! I super love this poem. A very beautiful poem for Mother's Day indeed! Belated big congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Richard. I'll fave this one. Thank a lot! love and hugs, Leonora

Noel Villarosa

Date: 5/18/2013 12:13:00 AM

Congrats Richard for a deserving win on this contest. I really like how you incorporated the colors to make this poem so admiring to read. I am sure your sweetie is really fascinated with your message here. (^_^) Noel.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/18/2013 6:15:00 AM

Thanks Noel, I appreciate your visit.

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/17/2013 10:37:00 AM

It's well penned with free heart's ink. Big congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2013 1:28:00 PM

Thanks bl

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/17/2013 10:31:00 AM

Well written tribute to your "sweetie". I know she will like this. Congrats on your deserving placement. AO

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2013 1:27:00 PM

Thanks A.O. I like the new Avatar picture.

Colleen Bono

Date: 5/17/2013 8:39:00 AM

another well deserved win.It is always a pleasure to read your writes.congrats.take care

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2013 1:26:00 PM

Thanks Colleen!

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/17/2013 8:18:00 AM

What a beautiful tribute to the one you love!! Congratulations!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2013 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Carrie

Constance La France

Date: 5/17/2013 8:12:00 AM

Richard, congratulations on your win with this lovely poem, constance

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2013 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Constance.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/16/2013 9:58:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS, Richard! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda

Colleen Bono

Date: 5/13/2013 10:12:00 AM

can't imagine being color blind but you described colors beautifully in this write.Your sweetie is a very lucky lady.take care

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2013 8:25:00 AM

Not so bad, thanks for caring.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/12/2013 11:18:00 PM

I had no idea you were color blind, Rick. It seems with every color blind person I meet it's always yellow that is the one color they see best. Your Yellow Shoes poem makes a lot more sense to me now! Lovely tribute btw... I'm sure she will appreciate it!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2013 6:23:00 AM

Yes she did, thanks.

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/11/2013 6:22:00 PM

Awww, a sweet poem to your sweetie. She sure is a lucky gal. Have a wonderful Mother's Day with your sweetie, Richard. Licia :-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/11/2013 8:32:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words and smile, hugs Rick

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/11/2013 9:29:00 AM

A very nice and lovely poem, a nice color to love and enjoy. This makes a very nice mother's day poem. Richard, thank you for all the nice and lovely visits in the past. After seeing and hearing the things that go on in this world, gives me reason to pray and never take my true poet friends for granted. Enjoy the greatest people and things in life. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *LINDA

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/11/2013 11:26:00 AM

Richard, thank you for the sweet comment. It s hard to keep up with so many poets. However from here on I will never take my good poet friends for granted. Many poets here have been nothing but good to me. Sometimes I forget them when I'm all coiled up with my own problems. I keep telling myself everyone is alike and I should be like them, but I am wrong we are all different, and I should go back and start being myself. Go back, and enjoy everyone the way I would in the past. You are a wonderful man, and I thank you for that one day you reached out to me a long while back. well not that long ago :-).... LINDA

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/11/2013 10:55:00 AM

You are a sweetheart Linda, I am amazed how you manage to keep in contact with so many people. I wrote this one for my sweetie for mothers day. I noticed you are running a contest after reading Freddies poem so I have now entered your contest as well.

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 5/11/2013 9:08:00 AM

So sweet! This is so beautiful Rick, she must be very happy and also lucky to have this from you :) wishing you a lovely day Rick, hug, Yanny

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/11/2013 10:57:00 AM

She will get it on Sunday. I hope you are enjoying your day as well.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/11/2013 8:55:00 AM

Oh....wow...how romantic and sweet. She's the colors you can't see....She must be one amazing woman to be able to do that for you...Thanks for the Mother's Day wishes. Read the poem to your Mother. Very sweet. They are the fortunate ones. Take care.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/11/2013 8:57:00 AM

Nice of you to say however I feel like I got the better end of the bargain. ;0)