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Color Me Azure

stain the skies with grey then color me azure tinge my thoughts with mauve then put thunder in my words and let my muse rain down

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/20/2016 8:43:00 PM

ohhhhh..."let my muse rain down"...LOVE THAT!!! congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/27/2016 1:43:00 PM

This is an excellent write Joseph. 5 lines of gold!

Joseph May
Date: 9/6/2016 4:01:00 PM

Thank you Daniel

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2016 12:41:00 PM

- Excellent written, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May
Date: 8/27/2016 1:20:00 PM

Thank you Sunshine ..hugs

John Fleming

Date: 8/27/2016 12:41:00 PM

Over time I am finding the "Tanka" style of poetry more and more appealing...This is very good indeed, Joseph - Superb in fact!! My very best regards. :) john P.s Top marks!

Joseph May
Date: 8/27/2016 1:19:00 PM

It is a very nice style...Thank you John

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2016 12:12:00 PM

A storming write Joseph! :-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 8/27/2016 1:17:00 PM

Thank you Jan...hugs