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Collegiate Mantis

COLLEGIATE MANTIS solo stick figure genuflects at the knees leafy green, prophet-like. petitions God with a tenacious grip - of the windshield wipers, assiduous antennas flapping in the breeze. holds on to the lord’s favor, even as i send his pew flying this way and that. with intense stereo-vision he sees far into the future… like jiminy cricket, his friendship is vital. peripheral vision perfect, judiciously looks both ways. o miraculous mantis - sentinel of paradise, keep watch over my child. 4th place winner 8/17/2016 contest: Praying Mantis sponsored by: Anthony Slausen

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Date: 9/17/2016 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful fourth placement Kim! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2016 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 9/17/2016 12:30:00 PM
Well, Kim, I didn't see that one coming. I told the Mantis that hitchhiking was not the safest way to travel. Congrats on your placement in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2016 6:43:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 9/17/2016 12:23:00 PM
'Outside the box' for sure, Kim! Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2016 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 8/19/2016 2:57:00 PM
Such a unique take on the theme Kim:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2016 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2016 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! :)

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