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Colleen Goes To the Sea

Her vacation day It is here at last Colleens bags are packed I hope she has a blast Off to the coast For some ocean air Sparkling waters Wind blowing her hair Walk along the beach Searching for some shells Sand between her toes Feeling like Tinkerbell All of her troubles Washed out to Sea Like a Sea Gull She feels really free With the sound of waves Crashing on the shore Life is much better Than ever before The sun on her face The warm ocean breeze A moment so perfect She feels so at ease She wraps this picture To hold in her mind For easy access When life isn't kind She'll later unpack To relive again Her piece of heaven To erase life's pain Dedicated to Colleen I hope you find a Unicorn to ride or a horse that is realated to one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/4/2013 2:59:00 PM
I still love to be beside the seaside! This is the season to jet into Mombasa and suntan your cold away!
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Date: 7/15/2013 11:01:00 AM
Forget the horse. It is 50 dollars an hour and you have to go in groups. I have the worst head and chest cold. Love Colleen
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Date: 7/13/2013 11:31:00 AM
Thank you so much. I am going to take a notebook to the beach and sea what happens. My sister is a bartender so I am pretty happy by evening. Last night little to much. Today, I dont think I need to. Last 2 nights were interesting. They wont let me go for a swim. But I am faster then they are.LOL Love Colleen
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Date: 7/12/2013 6:45:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Richard! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2013 6:51:00 AM
You as well Anne Lise
Date: 7/12/2013 2:20:00 AM
Nice and warm dedication for Colleen.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2013 6:39:00 AM
Thanks Manel
Date: 7/11/2013 10:00:00 PM
A beautifully breezy sunshiny write for Colleen. Hope all your wishes for her come true. Thanks ever so much for taking the time to welcome Dylan. I'm touched. You are very kind, Richard. Bless you.... :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2013 6:40:00 AM
My pleasure, he has poetic talent and will only get better.
Date: 7/11/2013 4:50:00 PM
fantastic imagery Richard beautifully penned Shadow x smiles
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2013 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Shadow.
Date: 7/11/2013 4:37:00 PM
Richard, this is really wonderful, I so enjoyed reading it and wishing it was I on that shore with the sand, and the wind, and the sun, constance
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2013 6:30:00 PM
Well I hope you take some time for yourself. Thanks for commenting.

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