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My pencil draws small white sails I see them crawl past Sailing boats Slowly moving left and right My pencil draws small white sails against dark water and blue sky Shapes form in listless clouds Imagination swims among the cursive waves As anchors find the murky bottom of the once blank page now teeming with life Scratches evolve, come alive Where water bites the sand away, small crabs crawl I watch you walk towards me, capture your silken sunlit hair Sailboats fade beyond the horizon leaving in their wake poetic phrases swirling in a mesmeric tide Speaking in a language of love that only our two hearts can hear *** July 6, 2017 For contest: Collaboration Contest Sponsor: Jan Allison

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Date: 11/15/2017 7:38:00 PM
A very touching and lovely write.
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Date: 11/15/2017 1:42:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful co-writing, Darren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darren White
Date: 11/15/2017 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/15/2017 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations love! xomo :)
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Darren White
Date: 11/15/2017 1:40:00 PM
Thanks ma mo :)
Date: 11/15/2017 12:28:00 PM
Congrats Darren and Chris....great collarb....Seren
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Darren White
Date: 11/15/2017 1:40:00 PM
Thanks Seren :)
Date: 11/15/2017 11:20:00 AM
Darren and Chris this was so so beautiful and I loved it from start to finish, many congrats on your top spot in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 11/15/2017 11:24:00 AM
Thanks Jan, hugs :)
Date: 7/10/2017 2:58:00 PM
Mixing the art of poetry with sketching is genius as you have both created a lovely poem that causes the imagination to soar. You make a great team. I am sure Jan will notice the creativity in this piece! : )
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Darren White
Date: 7/10/2017 11:16:00 PM
Chris is a wonderful poet to work with, we write together with such ease, it is a pleasure! Thanks Connie :)
Date: 7/9/2017 7:31:00 AM
A wonderful collaboration Darren and Chris. I love it and its a winner in my eyes already, but good luck...Maria
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Darren White
Date: 7/10/2017 11:14:00 PM
Maria, thank you :) Whether we win or loose, it was just a fun write!
Date: 7/6/2017 10:13:00 PM
Coodoolly and prachtig! Wunderbar! Look forward to seeing this on the winners' list!
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Darren White
Date: 7/7/2017 12:23:00 AM
Wornamea, hahaha!
Date: 7/6/2017 9:22:00 PM
Sailing and the sea, romance and writing - so many wonderful images. I love your collaboration <3
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Darren White
Date: 7/7/2017 12:23:00 AM
Thanks my friend, can you see the little boats in the distance?
Date: 7/6/2017 9:48:00 AM
A lovely poem "scratched out" Darren and Chris :) great work together:)
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Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 11:08:00 AM
We scratch away, Jo :) Thank you!
Date: 7/6/2017 9:30:00 AM
This is beautiful Darren. I was as though I were there. Well done! - Dean
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Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 11:08:00 AM
Dean, thank you so much. It was great as always, writing with Chris :)
Date: 7/6/2017 7:55:00 AM
A beautiful poem you've created...love the flow and imagery
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Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 9:08:00 AM
There are so many great collaborations for the contest, I absolutely love it!
Date: 7/6/2017 7:48:00 AM
Your pencil draws much more than snails. Two pencils combined here to sketch emotions expressed so eloquently.
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Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Lin :)
Date: 7/6/2017 7:35:00 AM
A great collaboration this is...I love the poetic phrases swirling. Good luck in the contest :)
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Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, it was fun to do :)
Date: 7/6/2017 7:25:00 AM
A beautiful poem emerges from the sailing boats...Great collaboration you two.... GL in the contest
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Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 7:33:00 AM
Joseph, thank you!

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