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Collaborating In the Clouds

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Below is the poem entitled Collaborating In the Clouds which was written by poet Laurel Larison. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Collaborating In the Clouds

There is a place I am walking up a ladder
I see clouds everywhere
I see up the ladder a figure standing 
Guidiing me to the light
I am at the top and the lights are so bright
Never hurting my eyes
The Lord watches and guides me with holding out His hand
I ask the Lord what did I do to deserve so
Much of your love and to be in this wonderful place
The Lord replied with great kindness and said child
you gave me the best gift a person could give
Your undying love, prayers and good things you did for others
You see child He said to me the kind deeds you did for 
my poor, defenseless children on earth you gave them
food, water and shelter where you could and you in fact
were helping me.
But most of all Child you gave me your heart and soul and tried the
best you could for all those in need. Prayers were done not for recognition but for my glory
Now rest here child with me for all eternity

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  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:11:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Clouds" contest Laurel. Love, Carol

    Larison Avatar Laurel Larison
    Date: 7/9/2012 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh thanks so much ! xoxo have a good day, laurel
  1. Date: 7/9/2012 1:39:00 AM
    Laurel congrats on your win...David

    Larison Avatar Laurel Larison
    Date: 7/9/2012 5:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh thank you so much. I didnt know I won.. hehehe laurel
  1. Date: 7/7/2012 11:56:00 PM
    Laurel, congratulations with your beautiful collaboration in the clouds. Read every poem over and over. Thank you for the support, God Bless :-) PD

    Larison Avatar Laurel Larison
    Date: 7/8/2012 8:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words. i am so happy to be on this site too. people are wonderful.
  1. Date: 6/20/2012 6:25:00 AM
    Beautiful written poem Laurel, love it. - Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Larison Avatar Laurel Larison
    Date: 6/20/2012 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh thanks so much. I actually entered it in a contest here. xoxo laurel