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Cold Days

Crunching under foot Is the freshly fallen snow Muffling all sound

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Date: 7/1/2009 8:17:00 AM

Glad summer is finally here. We had way too much of that crunching stuff this past winter. Nice one! Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Mc Mc

Date: 12/31/2008 3:09:00 AM

muffling sound- like it good Haiku, Matthew!!

Date: 12/22/2008 12:45:00 PM

I like the sound imagery in this one. Interesting last line gave me pause of thought. We're supposed to get more snow here in North Dakota tomorrow. We already have more than enough. Nice use of just three lines. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Karen

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/22/2008 3:08:00 AM

Excellent haiku, I too love that sound! Although, the walking is kinda hard here right now, we just got 3 feet of snow in 2 days! love Kristin

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/21/2008 7:24:00 PM

Excellent haiku you've penned here Mathew. I love those cold days...Raul

Daniel Neal

Date: 12/21/2008 7:12:00 PM

Nice haiku, i like the muffling sound. DN