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having a bad day... on the freezer shelf .... Häagen Dazs ice cream!!! Jan Allison 29th April 2016

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Date: 5/1/2016 7:35:00 AM
Hehe!! :) :)
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Date: 5/1/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Sneha:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/30/2016 11:01:00 AM
This Senryu says something really worth while. Love, daver
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Date: 4/30/2016 11:11:00 AM
Thanks Daver - I think we need a massive 'soup bowl' full of ice cream for us all to share:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/30/2016 5:59:00 AM
Just what the doctor ordered...I'll have a dollop..
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Date: 4/30/2016 7:00:00 AM
Joseph I hink we need a big soup bowl of ice cream we can all share :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/30/2016 12:02:00 AM
You have me licked with this one!!!
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Date: 4/30/2016 3:34:00 AM
lol:-) Well I know that if I get stressed -I can just head for the desserts lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 6:10:00 PM
Yes, I do find myself eating sweets when life gets me down..I am trying to elevate my serotonin levels..Enjoyed reading your work and especially like the Minion..Sara
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Date: 4/29/2016 6:12:00 PM
Thanks Sara I wrote the poem then found the image and thought it was perfect to go with my theme:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 5:31:00 PM
Give me a double gallon! delicious way to unstress :)
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Date: 4/29/2016 5:39:00 PM
LOL Cash - am happy to share a big bowl and we can de stress together:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 4:31:00 PM
:) I like your poem, sweetie. Haagen Dazs is yum...but I'd prefer a chocolately gooey mess of a dessert. ;) To each his own...Hugs
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Date: 4/29/2016 4:32:00 PM
Thanks Eileen I don't often eat desserts ... but when stressed what better way to make yourself feel good lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 1:50:00 PM
- Ice cream helps against everything, Jan - Tomorrow I'm going to Stord close to Tittelsnes in confirmation - Do you still have living relatives there ? - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 4/29/2016 2:30:00 PM
oh wow Sun - no my aunt Constance passed away many years ago but she did have other Norwegian relations - distant to us - I think Constance was my mum's cousin I think - she used to work in a shipping company in Stord if I remember correctly. i did have a pen pal of one of the relations but lost contact many many years ago :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 11:02:00 AM
Very nice senryu..............hugs.
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:26:00 AM
Thanks Manmath:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 10:16:00 AM
By all means get the desserts then!! Hello, Jan. Hugs. ;)
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Date: 4/29/2016 10:28:00 AM
i much prefer desserts to stressed! hugs jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 9:52:00 AM
Ice cream is perhaps my greatest weakness. BTW, Jan, it's Häagen Dazs and its American. Happy eating. / M
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:57:00 AM
Thanks Maurice - I have amended it .... I just eat it I don't notice the spelling ... of course other makes of ice cream are readily available too my son loves Ben & Jerry's :-) :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 9:10:00 AM
Aha, wonderful lighthearted piece, Jan. Great picture too - Never noticed that! :D
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Michael - it wasn't until I tried to find a picture to go with the poem did I discover the palindrome too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 8:30:00 AM
I'll take some please. I though this was going to relate to Wish you were here by Pink Floyd...lol
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Date: 4/29/2016 8:36:00 AM
LOL - am a great Pink Floyd fan too hadn't thought of that link though :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 7:57:00 AM
Bad day or not, I'm always down for ice cream. Two faves are Chocolate Bordeaux Cherry, and Moose Tracks. Sweet(pun intended) little senryu, Jan. yummers
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Date: 4/29/2016 8:00:00 AM
I agree ... I don't need a bad day for yummy ice cream Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 6:59:00 AM
Wow, Jan! Awesome, expressive senryu!! I never new the backwards stressed deal...that is soo Kool..is that a palindrome? Eat your dessert and start your day over :), with love, jill
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Date: 4/29/2016 7:02:00 AM
Yes I never realised the clever palindrome of desserts until I tried to find a picture to go with the poem - how apt it is too:-) Now where's my spoon lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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