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Cold Comfort

Cold Comfort And so the ducks of season – fled left me standing – holding bread as leaves – fresh fallen - drifted by the tears of trees that couldn’t cry. The muskrats weave their mounds of reeds while squirrel and chipmunk search for seeds preparing for long winter’s nap cold fingered tree - withdrawing sap. Coyote’s yip and wolves low growl soon to turn to hunger’s howl baying at the harvest moon reflecting only cold - at noon. As the crust of captive bread submerges I bow to instinct driven urges. John G. Lawless 8/24/2014

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Date: 9/5/2014 10:14:00 PM
John, :) Congratulations, on your awesome win. Many, many thanks for supporting my contest. Stop by and enjoy my newest blog, "Thoughts." if you'd like. Good night, LUV ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/25/2014 5:23:00 PM
cool poem and the title you gave it too. I noticed it has a sonnet's meter most of the way through it and that ending couplet. If you had alternated the rhyme, this would have made a splendid English sonnet.
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Date: 8/25/2014 6:34:00 PM
Andrea, the English and the Irish have failed to agree on sooooo many things, including the proper lilt of the rhyme. Ever notice that everyone else has an accent but the Irish have a "Brogue"? Thanks for checking this out and for you insightful eval, always appreciated.

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