Cold

the midnight air was cold as she dangled her hand out the window the wind, rain, the road all beating louder, and louder leading up to a crescendo then silence all grey- moon, pavement, skin

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Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 10:23:00 PM

A great atmospheric win. Well done, Emery. Viv x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 1:42:00 AM

Hi Emery, Congrats on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2015 12:06:00 AM

Emery, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT

Emery Xx
Date: 7/14/2015 2:06:00 AM

Thanks so much SKAT:)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/13/2015 12:08:00 PM

oh this is so chilling congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Emery Xx
Date: 7/14/2015 2:05:00 AM

Thank you Jan!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/13/2015 8:44:00 AM

What a dark write with an even darker ending, I like it! Grats on a win, well done!

Emery Xx
Date: 7/14/2015 2:05:00 AM

Wow, thank you! I loved the contest theme!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/13/2015 1:18:00 AM

Emery, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Emery Xx
Date: 7/14/2015 2:04:00 AM

Ahh everyone has been so nice! Thank you for the warm welcome:)

Skat A

Date: 7/11/2015 11:21:00 PM

Emery, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Emery Xx
Date: 7/12/2015 1:09:00 AM

Awh thank you so much for that sweet welcome message! That was very kind and wonderful of you:)