Cold

COLD cold windy night thermometer at zero feels like ten below covers pulled tight let her blow cold wintry night tom cat with winter coat wants to stay in later with star shine my lady love he purrs Dave Austin

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2015 6:20:00 AM

So it was so cold that the Tom Cat wanted to stay in..Cute one.Enjoyed reading today..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2015 5:00:00 PM

REading this set again. I really love the second one!

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 2/3/2015 12:36:00 PM

Thats exactly how I feel right now...woke up to -20 this morning...brrrrr. Great write and great images Daver :) Ana

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 2/2/2015 9:17:00 PM

He's a lucky tom cat, much to purr about! Freezing cold and he gets to stay indoors and dream about his kitty.:)) Do cats dream like dogs, Daver? Hoping all's going great for you! Love you, Mikki

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/27/2015 7:14:00 AM

Wonderful images of a cold winter's night. I love snuggling up inside and watching the snow and wind blow outside as ice crystals freeze on the windows.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2015 11:04:00 PM

I really like the Tom cat part, Daver. Yep, the nights get cold. Brrrrrr. Love the snuggly covers.

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/24/2015 1:03:00 PM

Howdy Daver, hey mebbe th ole tom cat was shivering?)) L O L, keep well wrapped up dear friend, Joe..'

Constance La France

Date: 1/24/2015 11:51:00 AM

Dave, you describe a cold night so well in your poem, loved the part about the purring tom cat, lovely ~~