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Cold

This place im in so cold. Nothing you could behold. This place im in to see. There's nothing left for me. This place like a dark hole. There is no more control. This place like a frozen cave. Nothing will ever behave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/15/2011 6:11:00 AM
I can relate to this. Nice job.
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Date: 2/14/2011 9:42:00 AM
These paired lines are considered rhyming couplets. They have decent descriptiveness and rhyming.
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