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Cold

Your words are cold They slice through me like ice Your voice is harsh Filling my head with hatred Your eyes pierce through my skull I see your lips moving But I don't understand you I don't wanna hear you I'm trying to run away But my feet don't move I feel it I feel it I can't control it Here it comes The tears pour down They blur my vision They slide down my cheeks It's burning It's burning But like your words It leaves me feeling cold...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/8/2016 1:15:00 AM
Megan, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/21/2015 10:00:00 AM
Megan, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/25/2009 5:23:00 PM
Kool piece Megan, a joy to read>>James
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:56:00 PM
very powerful verse. Just a bit of advise..don't give away so much of yourself...he probably liked nothing better than to see you cry...don't give your tears to him BIG HUGS over & Over HUGS......Light & Love
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Date: 12/31/2008 2:19:00 PM
Megan - Deeply emotional Poetry - wow - Welcome to the Soup - Happy New Year & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/31/2008 1:57:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Megan! A highly emotive piece full of powerful language... well done! Best wishes, Keith
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