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Coherent Thoughts

Truth could not be eclipsed, And you said it was a joke. There was a mystical feeling, Behind your saying that you didn't care. I could feel obscure pain beneath, And you said it was alright . A desire was shrouded, Once you said I should leave you alone. An Imperceivable feeling was sensed, And you said you didn't know. I could feel you in disguise, There was a silence of deep sea water. Written May 16th, 2013 Featured poem of the wk as on Sept 9th'13

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Tim Smith

Date: 7/18/2014 10:04:00 PM

I bet you could cut the tension with a knife...hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/13/2014 9:34:00 AM

Thnx Tim u visited ! My first poem on soup!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/14/2014 9:08:00 AM

Oh this has a nice feel to it for your first poem here on the soup, it is amazing to go back and see the beginning offerings. You have beautiful words and beautiful thoughts :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/14/2014 9:28:00 AM

Thanks a lot Casarah! So nice to see u visit my very first page!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 12:19:00 AM

Upma, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/9/2013 12:24:00 AM

Thanks Linda !!

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2013 11:17:00 AM

UPMA, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/25/2013 11:20:00 AM

Thanks a lot!!! That's too much of an encouragement !!