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Coconut Kisses and Peppermint Streams

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This is written in acknowledgement to the lovely sweet men and wonderful Poets on Poetry Soup who have supported and encouraged me since I first joined. PSST! I’m certain they all have a sweet-tooth. Demetrius Trifiatis, Silent One, Paul Callus, Victor Buhagiar, Chris Green, Peter Duggan and Darren White, Robert Lindley and George V - A big thank you to all you fine Poets. I wade to you through peppermint streams While thoughts of sugar plums dance in my head And when on land I mark my way With bright colored jelly beans of green and red There are lollipop signs with delicious swirls Atop red and white posts like candy canes With delectable names like Chocolate Fudge Mews Caramel Road and Honey Dew Lanes Sweet Avenues and Streets - a mouth-watering choice This yellow brick road looks so like Honey comb Oh did you tell me to turn right or left? Might take a bit longer to get to your home! These bushes of delicious coconut cream kisses And lolly golly bliss bombs ever so blue Might tarry a bit while I sample these sweet treats Don’t mind if I do - You won’t mind if I do? Luscious flowers on that tree just like fairy floss Oh my! Now this I cannot resist Just another mouthful for along the way Then lunch at 12 - you did insist The ginger bread house that’s just up ahead With a sweet fence surround like licorice twists Its then that I see you waving to me With a large box of chocolates - Oh what bliss!! By The Glasser Sound Orchestra - Sugar Sugar POTD 15th June 2017

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/31/2020 4:34:00 PM

An Incredibly Sweet Poem!! I enjoyed listening to the Music, while reading these words filled with yummy moments. :) This is cute, clever and creative. I am sure those you dedicated it to, loved it. Your talent shines my dear friend. Now I am hungry for a mouth watering lollipop. :) Brandy

Maria Williams
Date: 2/1/2020 12:45:00 AM

Oh you remembered to visit , that's very sweet of you Brandy, thank you. Yes, had fun with this one, but no more sweets unfortunately, my New Year's resolution for this year....Maria Hugs

Gayle Rodd

Date: 4/30/2018 7:49:00 PM

This was just charming! (Now excuse me but I must go brush my teeth!! ;)

Maria Williams
Date: 5/1/2018 1:25:00 AM

Lol, yeah sure or you might have to toddle off to the dentist I guess, thanks Gayle for the visit....Maria :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/3/2018 7:34:00 PM

Just rereading this sweetness. And munching on some macaroons. Lol! Still love it...hugs and smiles and love always :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/29/2017 7:16:00 PM

You know this could be for my birthday too.. Lol! You posted on my birthday, what a sweet thing, but then again you are a kind sweet soul. I love it to pieces :)

Maria Williams
Date: 8/30/2017 6:47:00 AM

Oh so you are a Gemini, I'm a Sagittarius, The best star signs right? So glad that you liked this sweet poem, a bit of fun it was. Akkina my dearest friend, thank you for all the support, I really appreciate it....Maria xxx

Edward Mccall

Date: 7/16/2017 12:06:00 PM

What a delicious poem it certainly revved up my sweet tooth.

Maria Williams
Date: 7/21/2017 8:20:00 AM

Not enough to get you to the dentist I hope Edward? Thanks for the visit and comment...Maria

Funom Makama

Date: 6/30/2017 9:42:00 AM

This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.

Maria Williams
Date: 7/7/2017 6:06:00 AM

Thanks so much Funom, so glad that you liked this , it was a real fun write for these lovely sweet poets...Maria

Afzal Nusker

Date: 6/25/2017 12:25:00 AM

My stomach churns. I think I do need many spoonful of castor oil after reading this twee poem. Just kiddin...it's a fabulous poem on so many levels, Maria. Loved it utterly.

Maria Williams
Date: 6/25/2017 2:21:00 AM

Haha, do people still take castor oil? Might be a tad sweet this one for you, but you might find" Fruit of love", and" She" a bit more to your liking. No castor oil on those-promise!!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/18/2017 6:54:00 PM

Hi Maria, a wonderful tribute to such fine Gents and excellent poets of course. This fun write just sings into the heart and the stomach of course. I am feeling hungry already. A much belated congratulations for your Poem Of the Day. I have missed so many of them lately. This is well thought out, excellent poetry. My mouth was watering by the end. Now, if you had been swimming in a coke river that would have been the end for me. This write is excellent Maria. Has to be a fave. Higs....Mike XX

Maria Williams
Date: 6/20/2017 3:12:00 AM

Oh no we couldn't have you swimming in Coke, you are needed here, such a great poet like you. I'm sure you could indulge in the sweets now and again though? Thanks Mike for favoring this sweet piece and lovely visit. I so appreciate it... Maria xx

Niall Fulham

Date: 6/17/2017 9:23:00 AM

Hi Maria , nice to meet , thank you for the birthday wishes :))) very sweet write with a wonderful imaginative mind :)))hugs from Ireland

Maria Williams
Date: 6/17/2017 9:53:00 PM

Thanks for your comment Niall - Trust your 50th party was great. PS In case you are confused - we have met before- you might recognize me from the original profile picture on my Bio...Maria

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/17/2017 6:17:00 AM

Wow Maria. I just now see this one. Congratulations. What a fun write! And a great dedication to those poets who inspire us with beautiful writing :)

Maria Williams
Date: 6/17/2017 10:34:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi for taking the time to visit and for your comments. It's much appreciated. Not forgetting the ladies, the arrangement below 'SHE' is in honor the femininity and romance of us women as well as 'Fruit of Love' that is dedicated to all the Mums and Mums to be in the world. Hope you like them...Maria

Paul Callus

Date: 6/16/2017 3:24:00 PM

How very sweet of you, Maria:) A pleasure to be wowed by Candy Girl and the Archers! Thank you! ~ Also congratulations on POTD award. ~ Regards // paul

Maria Williams
Date: 6/17/2017 3:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul, I was so tempted to send you a soup mail to see your tribute - and was a tad disappointed but was patient. I intuited you may have been away. The POTD is no where close to your esteemed talent...Maria

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 6/15/2017 8:08:00 PM

Very sweet Maria! Congrats on POTD!:-)

Maria Williams
Date: 6/16/2017 5:12:00 AM

Thank you very much Keith for both your visit and for the congratulatory wish. Now! not too many of those treats please...Maria:)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/15/2017 1:36:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on POTD ~*

Maria Williams
Date: 6/16/2017 5:08:00 AM

Thank you very much Eve for your visit and for your congratulations...Maria

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/15/2017 1:12:00 PM

I agree w/Sunlite ... yum yum! Flight of fanciful delight you sent us on, Marie. Sweet-tooth heaven or Diabetic hell, however it goes, you wrote this poem very well. Kudos for POTD. Much deserved. Lots of love and hugs.

Maria Williams
Date: 6/16/2017 5:06:00 AM

Thanks for the congratulations Freddie, no nice of you to visit. Lots of love and hugs to you too..Maria PS now not too many of those Candies so the sweet heaven doesn't get you into diabetic hell:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/15/2017 12:04:00 PM

- Sweet hugs and congratulations, Maria :)

Maria Williams
Date: 6/17/2017 2:37:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend...Maria xx

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/15/2017 10:04:00 AM

What a sweet piece here. Congrats on your POTD. :)

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 10:19:00 AM

Thank you for your sweet visit, comment and congratulation Sunita...Maria

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 6/15/2017 9:34:00 AM

YUM YUM! Congratulations!

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 9:42:00 AM

Thanks so much Sunlite for the Sweet Visit and comment. Hope you didn't have to go the dentist too? lol ..Maria

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/15/2017 9:18:00 AM

Congrats on your deliciously sweet potd Miss Maria... hugs :)

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 9:27:00 AM

Thank you Akkina for visiting and congratulating. Much appreciated. I didn't forget a dedication to us Ladies too in my previous poem - 'SHE' with the music of the same song by the same name. Hope you like it...Maria PS It looks like a huge fish you caught - Congrats for that

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 6/15/2017 9:06:00 AM

What a sweet and fun dedication, Maria. Congratulations on a well deserved PotD:) Amitiés

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 9:29:00 AM

Hi again Anne-Marie, I hope you were able to watch the film clip on the poem - It doesn't seem to play it from the POTD page...Mariaxx

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne-Marie. I haven't forgotten a dedication to us Ladies, our Femininity and Romance in the previous poem 'SHE' to the tune of the same name. I haven't seen you for a while and missed reading your lovely works...Maria xx

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/15/2017 9:03:00 AM

Sweets for the sweet...now everyone has a toothache lol...Congrats!!! on POTD Maria...very sweet of you...all the best...^WW^

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/15/2017 4:49:00 PM

Yes, it plays from my side...one of my fav's too...loved the Archies...I'm a big Jug-Head lol...without the crown lol...^WW^

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 9:47:00 AM

Were you able to watch the film clip to this? Doesn't seem to play from the POTD page. Its a cool rendition to the Archies Sugar Sugar

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 9:21:00 AM

Thanks WW for the compliment - They're going to start accusing me of working in collaboration with a dentist next- Lol! OK - you have permission to go and raid the cookie jar - only a small raid mind you!...Maria

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/15/2017 8:02:00 AM

What a kind and generous gesture Maria, congratulations for POTD honors.

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Charlie, it's a tribute for all you wonderful poets as well. I didn't forget a tribute the Ladies too in my previous poem 'SHE'...Maria

Agnes Krampe

Date: 6/15/2017 7:52:00 AM

Congrats on your sweet POTD, Maria.

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 7:56:00 AM

Thank you to your sweet self too for taking the trouble to congratulate me Agnes. Now not too many sweets or the Dentist appointment may be necessary - Much appreciated Agnes...Maria

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/15/2017 7:37:00 AM

Back to say congratulations on POTD, Maria:)

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 7:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Daniel - now I hope you haven't been raiding the cookie jar too much...Maria

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/15/2017 7:14:00 AM

A lovely and a sweet dedication! Congratulations to you and these lovely gentle men :) xomo

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 7:39:00 AM

Thank you so very much for taking the time to show your appreciation of the poem and the lovely gentlemen. But I didn't forget us ladies in my tribute to Women's Femininity and our romantic side in my previous poem 'SHE' - I hope you will like that too. Maria

Surjendra Das

Date: 6/15/2017 7:14:00 AM

Exquisite poetry, madam Congratulations for your successful poetry being a student of class 9 you are my inspiration for poetry Great really my each and every word is less to describe and continue the taste of heaven

Maria Williams
Date: 6/15/2017 7:25:00 AM

Thank you so much Surjendra. Your comments are greatly appreciated. I wish you all the best with your studies...Maria