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Coccinella Magnifica

A mystery to some, but not to me, why one would call thee, "Lady" Other beetles could be called fair, some would even argue scholarly But gentlemanly? Now that's a stretch if I ever heard one Have you ever seen a bloke worth his salt sporting a polka-dot dress? (...probably best to just let the question lie...) But don't take my advice, tiny traveler, antenna-clad Hop aboard this here fingertip if adventures be your wish (and boredom be your curse) It's sure to be a bumpy ride, but you'll have a smile a mile wide (for me quite literally) Just hang on tight and I cross my heart I won't let you hurt... ...on this skyscraper of a vehicle you traverse I'll show you the greener grass and the fairer fields You can show me the tiny wonders of your micro-plains, your myriad kind (take a breath on this here forget-me-not I'm sure you won't mind) For it's just a quick stop and all at once - we're back again - to wonders many and thousand mile 'n' hour winds (is your seat-belt strapped in? because we're gonna go fast) Past the neighborhood block and maybe the next neighborhood too (but the moment we reach the county line, that's when we'll have to think things through) Reassess Take it in Not all of life takes place on a giant's back (however well meaning) Sometimes we have to make our own movements, even it's meager             (even if it's fleeting) My six legged ruby from fingerbridge   to fingerbridge I don't know if I was your beginning or your middle, but in either case you'll have to finish ...your steps not mine (I swear it will be divine) Not an easy trip, but it'll be worth it and you'll be a better ladybird for it (if you had pinkies   I'd make a promise, but you'll just have to take       my word for it) You can't stay forever, little one, any second you must depart-- to open air and summer sound, to aqua skies      (and smaller friends) Find a home, oh precious gem, far away from this earthquake ground For we both knew this moment would come when you took that first freckled-step to my welcoming nail; our curious outfit was destined to fail, not with pomp and fanfare   or trumpets of exuberance, but with the whisper of wings (see that crimson jewel becoming one with the blue? how it sings) It's gonna hurt like a gram of bricks (but not too quick, toothpick, let me let you in on a little secret) we'll cross that knuckle when we come to it

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Date: 4/7/2021 9:09:00 PM
Delightful poem, Timothy ~ wrapped up perfectly with "we'll cross that knuckle when we come to it"
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/7/2021 10:23:00 PM
Thanks Line. I'm quite proud of this quirky poem ... not sure where it came from (but then again I never know where ANY of the poems come from .. they just seem to fall out of sky ... we wonder why).
Date: 5/11/2020 3:12:00 PM
I can relate to such a lovely relationship with a ladybird (and many other small creatures), Timothy, but never translated it into a delightful poem such as this one. Coccinella is a good listener...I wonder what she told you before you had to part! ~ Regards // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2020 7:56:00 PM
... between her and I ;) Thanks for your kind words, always, Paul.
Date: 5/11/2020 11:08:00 AM
I was enthralled all the way through this adventure of the lady bug and you. You are such an entertaining poet. I stand in great admiration Timothy. xxoo
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2020 7:55:00 PM
Thanks for being a wonderful fan, Connie ... I am glad you were entertained!
Date: 5/10/2020 12:02:00 PM
I'm glad you have a special beetle in your life...
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2020 7:54:00 PM
Thanks Silent.... it's those ephemeral moments that are special.
Date: 5/9/2020 11:27:00 PM
Timothy, 'It's gonna hurt like a gram of bricks' weighs so heavy on my mind. The poet's frolicking insect, lithe, lighthearted, and so well defined. -Richard
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2020 7:54:00 PM
I appreciate your extremely thoughtful comment, Raven. I was a particular fan of that line myself.
Date: 5/9/2020 9:40:00 PM
haha, is that poor bug gonna die perhaps when she meets the rush of wind and jumps off your hand? You are such a delight!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2020 7:53:00 PM
Hopefully not ... may she live a long life long afterwards! (depending on how long ladybugs live anyway ... lol). Thanks!
Date: 5/9/2020 2:34:00 PM
What a story teller you are, Tim....and what a trip. I didn’t want it to end. I often rescue bugs that ride a flower bunch inside. I’ll always think of your poem when I see a ladybug now. Ever the kind giant to the insect world, you are - and always a delight to read. Hugs, SuZ
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thanks Suz. You have such a special affinity for the natural world so I figured you would like this one.
Date: 5/9/2020 12:46:00 PM
Oh, the build up! You had me howling right on cue! Love it. xomo
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thank .. "Pigeon Tart" .. INNNnnteresting.
Date: 5/9/2020 8:14:00 AM
Delightful, perspective makes all the difference. I have been scouring nurseries to find Lady Bugs. Sadly there are none to be found. They love aphids and I wanted them to come to my house for a buffet.
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Date: 5/12/2020 7:51:00 PM
They are very helpful creatures (not just adorable!). Thanks for the stop as always!
Date: 5/9/2020 7:29:00 AM
Kudos for this creative write, Tim--enjoyed the journey through your imagination ..with the polka-dot lady. A splendid poem you wrote!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2020 7:51:00 PM
Thanks again for your committed support, my friend!
Date: 5/9/2020 5:54:00 AM
Loved your journey in to that microscopic world, had to Google coccinella, I thought you were referring to ladybirds. Got me thinking about honey I shrunk the kids. What an amazing experience that would be. Tom
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2020 7:50:00 PM
Normally, I don't go for "too weird" of titles ... but in my research on ladybugs I found that was the scientific term for it and I liked the sound of it. Thanks for your creative comment.
Date: 5/9/2020 3:34:00 AM
or 7-spot ladybird (rare). great tribute, Nature Saint
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Date: 5/9/2020 3:32:00 AM
could be a special poem for a ladybug! shalom indeed! anil
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2020 7:48:00 PM
You interpreted this correctly ... thank you!

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