Coca Cola Addiction

Coca Cola Addiction Poison to The system Brown sugar fizz Sweetly sucked up refreshment That caffeine and honey coated advertisement Selling the taste Momentarily On the tongues of better life Bitterness The falsehood of immediacy Instant gratification And the better life will be Teaching the world To sing in perfect harmony Sung from the screaming throats Of hyper active children Coca Cola addiction Poison of The system Daily consumption One in the millions Hooked on the juice Of a better life Its better if it tastes so sweet Better by design And brainwashed imagery Better for your children Who want the sickly sweetness Of its bubbly fizz That never quenches Their thirst

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2010 5:59:00 AM

hers your lamo comment back,..this poem has no need to be read by myself as well. I think just the title lamer than the your replies. You have yourself a good day Mr. Bully. Leaving all them uncalled comments on my work. I really do not care for my stuff as well. Its a joke your a joke..once again thank you for your unneeded comment,..Sidney

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 7/18/2009 10:55:00 AM

Reply to Deborah... and we let our children drink that !!!!!! It should have a chemical hazard warning on it.... shheeesh what's it going to do to the lining of your stomach if it can get stuff off my pitifully burnt frying pan... ???¿¿¿¿!!!!

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 7/18/2009 8:40:00 AM

Laurie.. you are so funny its evil.. Pepsi indeed.. LOL

Laurie Ginn

Date: 7/18/2009 7:10:00 AM

I totally agree, finally someone speaks with intelligence and good taste. The Choice of a New Generation~Pepsi

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/17/2009 6:56:00 AM

Yep....I do know a lot of people who are hooked!!! (Have to laugh at Deborah's comment...!!!)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/17/2009 4:35:00 AM

1. Remove grease stains from clothing and fabric 2. Remove rust.3. Remove blood stains from clothing and fabric.4. Clean oil stains from a garage floor 5. Kill slugs and snails; a small bowl of Coke will attract them, the acid will kill them.6. Prevent an asthma attack! caffeine in two 12oz cans can prevent the onset .7. Defrost a frozen windshield. 8. Clean burnt pans; let the pan soak in the Coke, then rinse.9. Descale a kettle 10. Neutralize a jellyfish sting. Light & Love (it's)