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Cobblestones of Quicksand

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Cobblestones of Quicksand

cobblestones of quicksand
tapestries of oil
teardrops of marble
left out to boil

fingerprints of tree sap
diamonds of wood
ceilings of water
- not what it should

sea breeze of fire
windmills of stone
whispering of evergreens
as I stand alone

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  1. Date: 12/15/2011 3:56:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning entry Jon

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 8:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on a well deserved first place. As Debbie said, great imagery.

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 6:25:00 AM
    wow what cool imagery!! and i do love the wrap up ending Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 5:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Twelve" contest J. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 4:59:00 AM
    This poem takes me to a never never land...imaginative and loaded with unusual images..Congrats on this home run win. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 3:51:00 AM
    Congratulations and happy forthcoming holidays x

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 10:05:00 PM
    Very colorful.

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 2:22:00 AM
    I love the flow in this work J.. it glides of the tongue like syrup. I think I'll pop this in my favorites to read again...well done...Margaret

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 6:32:00 AM
    Congrats J.Dover on your 1st place win with this interesting write.Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 4:27:00 PM
    Congrats on a fantastic first place win J. Dover ..luv..

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 7:23:00 AM
    Interesting in the extreme and rythmic in form. Congratulations on your big win. Love. Joyce

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 5:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest J. Love, Carol