Cobbler

Cobbler fresh from the oven A piping hot peach Crumbled topping crisp to eat Sprinkled with sugar Such a tasty treat Top with cream Sweet! Inspired by Laura McKenzie's "Sweet Treat" contest.

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Date: 4/26/2009 1:19:00 PM

Congratulations on being chosen as one of the winners of the Sweet Treat contest with this tasty poem. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/20/2009 4:43:00 PM

So sorry I missed this delicious write! Warmest congrats on your win in Laura's contest! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/20/2009 4:34:00 AM

Lena - congratulations on your HM in the "Sweet Treat contest - God Bless, MJ

Brian Strand

Date: 4/20/2009 2:43:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Laura's contest Lolita..Rgds Brian

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 4/20/2009 2:05:00 AM

A yummy write, congrats on your win! Love, Kristin

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/19/2009 10:00:00 PM

Dear Lolita,Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Laura Mckenzie's Sweet Treat Contest As I said before Peach Cobbler my favorite dessert ALWAYS...HG

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/19/2009 9:18:00 PM

Congrats on your HM in the contest Lolita...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/19/2009 6:36:00 PM

Yummy cobbler....one of my favorites!! This poem is a favorite as well...congratulations on placing in Laura's contest, Lena!! Love, Carrie

Robin Maughan

Date: 3/17/2009 7:49:00 PM

Ok!now I have to get something sweet to eat!! Love this visual.. Love your work. Love filled shamrocks, Robin

Nicholas Westerhausen

Date: 3/14/2009 7:03:00 AM

this was an exciting read! the way this form flows and the way you bring out the very essence of cobbler through words is awesome =D. in love, nick

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/13/2009 11:18:00 PM

Dear Lolita, My favorite dessert when I lived in Las Vegas Every year on my birthday a sweet co-worker always made me a large pan of Peach Cobbler You have done a Superb Job of making my mouth water Good Luck in the contest My entry is"Blintzes ALWAYS ...HG

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/6/2009 12:31:00 AM

Nice epulaeryu Lolita, best of luck in the contest...Raul

Date: 3/4/2009 8:51:00 AM

Sounds yummy to me. I'll take some! Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/3/2009 4:59:00 PM

Sounds heavenly..best wishes in the contest.

Sandra Hudson

Date: 3/3/2009 4:46:00 PM

Miss Lolita, this is a wonderful example of an Epulaeryu type poem. You have triggered my tummy into thinking I know how to cook. Excellent work! Thank you for your warm and generous comments.-Always Alexandra

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/3/2009 4:30:00 PM

Oh boy....does that sound heavenly !!!