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Cobbled Path

The Rain falls within my heart, The cobbled street wastes away below my feet, Clouds of despair form over my head, The gloomy looks of passers by as i drag myself from corner to signpost. The Buildings are a cage of no escape, They force me within myself to find freedom, Seeking a Light i know i wont find, I continue walking.. With no end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/14/2012 12:28:00 AM
Superb!
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Date: 3/13/2012 6:16:00 AM
This is beaugtiful and congrats on feature.. Patrick
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Albert. Love, Carol
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Albert Noel
Date: 3/12/2012 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much:)
Date: 1/23/2012 12:28:00 AM
Yes welcome and thank you for sharing your sensitive imaginative write, Bren
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Date: 1/21/2012 1:58:00 PM
Absolutely love it! Welcome to poetrysoup captain ;)
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