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Dark (1) Colors (2) Like (1) Deep, deep (2) Cobalt Blue (3) Weeping (2) Sad (1) Not like (2) Gold sunshine (3) When the fall comes (4) Merchants weep, (3) The rich (2) Weep (1) Fallen, (2) All will cry (3) Cobalt (2) Blue (1) U.S. (2) Falls (1)
Waltzing With Color Inspired by Kim Merryman Written July 09, 2015 Syllable count as in the contest rules..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/13/2015 8:43:00 PM
Nice poem, Sara! Maary
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:00:00 AM
Sara, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/20/2015 5:14:00 PM
I see a pattern in your writes, Sara. You manage to almost always insert biblical references. Interesting and serves as reminder. Congrats! Kim :-)
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Date: 7/20/2015 3:47:00 PM
Congrats for the win. It was a most interesting way you chose that specific color, cobalt blue! (I think it is known as the color of peace)
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Date: 7/19/2015 3:26:00 PM
SARA, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2015 5:23:00 AM
Many congrats on your win Sara:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2015 12:06:00 AM
Sara congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/18/2015 11:55:00 PM
Sara, I recognize some references from the book of Revelations. Creative how you wove them around the color blue. Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/10/2015 11:24:00 PM
you have painted a very blue world, SAra. Creative thinking.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/11/2015 7:35:00 AM
Andea, Well, it is not totally blue..There are always rays of sunshine like the laughter of children at play or me laughing at things that they do.. Sara
Date: 7/10/2015 3:58:00 PM
A very pessimistic view of life that reflects the downward mood of the people in a time of change. Emile.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/11/2015 7:33:00 AM
Change is not necessarily bad but it can be..Wrong and evil have always existed ..I am speaking about the Book Of Revelations here..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Date: 7/9/2015 1:21:00 PM
I like the creative analogy that you have in this most excellent poem, Sara. It is sad and true, and it makes one weep cobalt tears, as you have described. Excellent, a 7 from me.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/11/2015 7:37:00 AM
Laura, Right on target with this uplifting review of my work.. Sara

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