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Ah, look! here is a fat white samurai, goes by the name of Jeffy. I see him, drunk and slurring insults in the direction of his brothers what a shame. He might have been someone yet here he is. If only Gawain or Kissinger or Super Mario could have been there instead of him, maybe they could have averted the situation from its violent course... But none of them were. And I, Jeffy, drunk and ever foolish fought a dirty fight in a dying bar against overpowering odds. And sadly, I won.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/6/2009 3:41:00 PM
well done on this write and the feature :) Been enjoying to read you.
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Date: 10/18/2009 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on having your wonderful poem featured!! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/12/2009 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Geoffery. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2009 5:55:00 PM
Cool stuff Geoffery! Congrats on being featured! - Tim
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Date: 10/11/2009 4:59:00 PM
Yes, it is sad. Gives the reader something to think about. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 9/23/2009 10:57:00 AM
It seems everyone's heart is flowing over today. Makes for some exciting reading. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Geoffery. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2009 8:24:00 AM
Good write...thanks for the kind words on "Casinos"...sorry for your loss, but that is why I don't go to them...they are there to make, not to make us rich..thanks Danny
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Date: 9/23/2009 6:43:00 AM
That was a grand finale indeed! That to in a stupor.Thanks for your comment! Were U cussin or complementin? feels like I'm in a stupor myself. Keep writin,I'm readin!All the best Geoff,may your CPU chug on! Prince
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Date: 9/23/2009 5:11:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Sara
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