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Clutching This Instance

If ever I had two hours with you… or three, the vacancy of this night and lulled shores would be refilled with the gushing of frosted air on our reveries past; the multitude of amiable stars bestowing a hush of surrender... raged midnights ending into fresh mornings backed by our theme song replayed. Then, to recall the sevens and nines of time cutting our names into crumpled paper: a departure of hearts traveling in different territories. We inched away, not because of lack for vows marked in deepest sands. But… by fate’s desire to shelter you in a faraway place, while I... I burned skies through the pain and beauty the long distance of regrets had claimed. If and when we unite again, two or three hours by God's grace, oh the fluttering of a thousand fearless thoughts would not be enough to say you were the branch that got away, and I was your last rose that lost its stem. Perhaps, now is the moment to clutch the moment? Regina Riddle's Seize The Day ( Carpe Diem) 10/26/2014

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Date: 11/15/2014 7:21:00 AM
Nette, I see this is another winner! Your phrasing always leaves me stunned. "Your last rose that lost its stem", amazing thoughts.
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Date: 11/9/2014 4:52:00 AM
Congrats,.,Sara
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Date: 11/6/2014 5:00:00 AM
A moving piece, congrats on the win, nette
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Date: 11/5/2014 10:23:00 PM
Yes now is always the best time to grasp the moment. Congratulations on a great poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:13:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 11/5/2014 3:45:00 AM
This is still one of my favorites for this challenge nette. I faved it. Love your quil on this write. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/2/2014 6:31:00 AM
Dear Nette: Lovely. Simply lovely. Hope you're enjoying your trip to the Holy Land. All the best then, Leon.
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Date: 10/29/2014 3:17:00 AM
I find it amazing how many diferent versions of seize the day poets are writting. This is one of the best I have read.
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Date: 10/28/2014 7:44:00 PM
so moving Nette a masterly pen that sings hugs
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Date: 10/27/2014 8:09:00 PM
Super-duper-Soupy-Soup-Mail...
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Date: 10/27/2014 7:55:00 PM
Yep, Scribe nailed it there but might I add: 'I burned skies through the pain and beauty the long distance of regrets had claimed' Oh mercy me...
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Date: 10/27/2014 8:57:00 AM
Vows marked in deepest sands ,, wow Nette! Wonderful write my friend! Gl in contest! Loved the final two lines much,, I was ur last rose that lost its stem!!
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Date: 10/26/2014 3:19:00 PM
So very beautiful. Now is always the time Netta
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Date: 10/26/2014 2:30:00 PM
Yes nette...now is the time...don't let this opportunity slip by...hugs Tim
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Date: 10/26/2014 1:42:00 PM
Fate has a kiss for every bliss, love knows feelings immortal in intensity, moments are opportunities to live Nette. Your poetry stimulates my heart, thank you. J.A.B.
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Date: 10/26/2014 1:36:00 PM
Beautifully penned Nette outstanding imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/26/2014 1:13:00 PM
Thats so beautifull dude.
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