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Rain clouds high above A mirror of tainted love… Will fall to pieces

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/30/2008 6:39:00 PM
soemtimes alot of words are not necessary to get the meaning across, take care D-nyce
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Date: 8/28/2008 11:54:00 AM
Intersting use of this short format. Much to think about in your words. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/28/2008 6:41:00 AM
Nicely done!! I can almost see broken glass falling from the sky!....Carrie
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Date: 8/27/2008 8:19:00 PM
The symbology is quite vivid. The flows very well. Great job! ~ Joseph
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