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Watching clouds as a hued mural against sky’s ceiling enthralls Embossing the dome with majestic stars, lustrous as fireworks; Then rain pours … to shapeshift nimbus into a bleak tapestry. ``Written for Jenish Somadas’ Let the Pens Flow-- Sijo Contest Checked byhomanysyllables.com 5/26/2020

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Date: 6/13/2020 6:46:00 PM
Your imagery is beautiful as always here, dear nette. congrats and also, thanks for my win in your contest.
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Date: 6/12/2020 7:00:00 AM
Oh that gorgeous hued mural and the dome embossed with stars. Your pen simply paints masterpieces Nette. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/12/2020 1:04:00 AM
You created wonderful imagery with this well crafted Sijo..Congratulations Nette..
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Date: 5/28/2020 12:24:00 PM
Clouds have fascinated me from a little girl, they change shape so elegantly and without any effort that you can not even notice it happening - one moment it is and the next it's not! Good luck in the contest my friend not that you need it. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/27/2020 6:07:00 PM
Magnificent Sijo, Dear Nette. Sure to top the winners list. Sincerely Elaine
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Date: 5/27/2020 7:09:00 AM
I really love this and wish you well in the contest. I'm sure it will place highly. Much blessings and love and prayers to you, Gina
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Date: 5/26/2020 2:41:00 PM
Nicely done! I've been watching clouds for more years than most people have lived, yet still enjoy it more than TV! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/26/2020 12:40:00 PM
- Great written, Nette - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/26/2020 12:07:00 PM
Amazing, Nette, a painting from you well described. A high score my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/26/2020 9:32:00 AM
Our ever changing view of the sky in all its glory. Well written Nette. Tom
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