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Clouds of the Hour

The wind stirs as a very soft zephyr Heavy solid gray clouds amassed Needing to release some water droplets But this too in a few days will have passed A new system will come in_dominate The area, rule with power Only right now we know not what Can only see the clouds of the hour It is quiet for now, no roosters crowing No frogs croaking, just one cricket It is that eerie feeling of quiet Before storm, last bleat of lamb in thicket We as humans don't know the future Our only hope is in the Living God's assurance I know the count is not right..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/12/2012 1:10:00 PM
beautiful sonnet, my friend
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Date: 6/12/2012 12:51:00 PM
Very awesome write dear poet ! I enjoyed this very much... correct count or not ! have a great day Sara ! Much love, james
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Date: 6/12/2012 10:08:00 AM
forget the count, sara... this work breathes with the light of life... and worth a second read.. you uplift me!!!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/12/2012 8:29:00 AM
Wow, Sara, you have created a beautiful poem right here! I have thoroughly enjoyed every line of your poem! This is quite the powerful write I must say! Wow, Sara, I'm in awe of this write, I really connected with it! Thank you for delivering this awesome poem to us all to enjoy, I'm honored to have read it! You've outdone yourself this time! Great Work!!
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